PLEASE stop saying "over and out" at the end of radio communications! I don't know who made it up but they don't no anything about using the radio. 'over' means 'end of sentence please reply' and 'out' means 'end of conversation don't reply' so using the popular phrase is actually a contradiction. I just thought I'd give you a heads up but please keep on writing, I love your work and I think it's really original.
best chapter yet! i never knew you were a doctor, intresting but it explains some of the slow updates (no offence). I think that Harry should have killed the Death Eaters seeing as its war and all, just kinda a comen sense thing. I think that Harry Potter stories have to much of a Political message in them (not saying that yours does, and might no be able to help it since thats the way J.K.R. decided to write HP). Im just saying that the ministry and harry and them should start fighting like they are at war and kill some death eaters. Just a personal opinion. BTW. your stories have been the most inspiration to me in my writing, im starting to think about writing something to Phoenix Song (the story is really that good to inspire me like that)
pottervader Friday 14th November 2008 16:04
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Thanks for the review. Yeah, I get quite busy so my time to write daily is limited. Well, I agree that it would be better to kill the Death Eaters but Harry in this story received his moral indoctrination from his father who naturally learned it from Dumbledore. So, Harry'd be reluctant to kill plus I thought it wouldn't be proper for an underage wizard to actively desire to kill someone. Unlike in our wars where it's hard not to kill someone while shooting them unless you're a marksman, it's possible to quickly disable your opponent without killing them. Of course, it might be considered crueler to sentence them to life in Azkaban with the Dementors than a quick death. Anyway, I'm glad to have inspired you to write. That's the same way I started. Reading fanfiction inspired me to write HP as I envision it. Thanks again for the review.
Very intense chapter it was great
James didn't seem to worried about Harry and Rose being in trouble I mean he just wondered about them then looked at his paper's
And I thought Harry knew about Ginny using the dairy in her first year isn't that how they're soul mates?
WHERE was Ti in this whole thing
Is Draco actually having real feelings for Hermione that would be kinda awesome and Ron is turning around about Ti and Draco FINALLY!
I hope Ti is ok where was he?
pottervader Friday 7th November 2008 07:32
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Thanks for the review. James was very worried for them and looked at his papers to distract himself because if he thinks about it too much, he just might go charging in to see how his children are doing which he can't do because of his responsibilities as Minister for Magic.
Early in their exploration of the bond, Harry and Ginny agreed to have a place in their minds where they can keep things private from the other, like birthday surprises, embarrassing moments from their childhood that they other doesn't know, etc. Ginny placed her memories from the time of the diary in that area. So Harry doesn't know the details of what Ginny went through when she was possessed by the diary because it's there.
You'll find out where Ti was in the next chapter.
You'll also have to wait to see what's going on with Draco.
Thanks again for the review. Until next time.
Thanks for the review. I know it was a terrible thing to have in the chapter, but it was needed to show how arrogant, sick and vicious the Death Eaters are. No, she didn't, You'll find out what's wrong in the next one.
Nice Chapter da..................gr8 use of potter's animagus form and ginny's fiery temper......and luved reading riddle being carried by the DE's!!!!! Hahahahahahahaha And rose's lifes gonna be hard now that the others have gotten air of her astral walking!!!! Anyways cant wait for ur next chapter!!!!
Ur Faithful reader
Varad
pottervader Monday 3rd November 2008 16:38
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Thanks for the review, Varad. I'm glad you liked it. Yes, Rose is going to have to face the music, specifically from her parents and a certain Canadian Native American. LOL! I'll try to post by next week.
Wow. That is very sad about what happened to Melissa. I am glad that Ginny stopped Harry from killing those Death Eaters, eventhough I wanted him too I know its not right.
I can't believe that Draco saved Hermione. I thought he was bad and using that pin he got Ti as something bad, but maybe it has some good things connected with the it.
I liked the arm band idea that Sirus had I actually thought they should do that too. That fight between Voldemort and Harry and then with Voldemort, Harry and Ginny was great! I was so suprised Harry and Ginny were holding their own extremely well. Too bad, Voldemort got away, but that would have been extremely too easy.
Excellent chapter as usual! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
pottervader Monday 3rd November 2008 16:45
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Yeah, I know it was bad. Oh, it's Melinda and not Melissa.
The fight with Voldemort pointed out that Harry is almost as strong as Voldemort but not his equal yet whereas together, Harry and Ginny are more than a match for him. Yes, it would be too easy to end it then though it was tempting.
Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. I hope to have the next one up by next week.
Why does Hermione trust Harry to conjure a stretcher but not clean and heal Ginny's wound??? Quite a contradiction that one is!
pottervader Monday 3rd November 2008 16:47
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Thanks for the review. Well. healing magic is different from conjuring. Hermione knows Harry is good with the latter plus sealing a wound doesn't necessarily prevent infection. I should know since I'm a doctor. LOL!