OMG. I just had an emphinany on why she wouldnt want to speak to Harry on what happened. However wouldnt Harry be able to do the same thing as Draco? Not exactly since Harry wouldnt use her like Draco was planning on doing, but to use the same scenario? Not sure what to think of your Hermoine. She is just too unpredictable. Yes she still is studious, but I dont remember her ever pranking in Canon, but you have her pranking here. It is the minor facets of her that have me confused. Hey I am not complaining it happens (and gives me ideas if I write a fic). Also like the fact that Harry is learning from Dumbledore finally (major point of his going so I am happy that it is happening. In truth alot happened in the 3 weeks so I understand why it hadnt happened earlier). A question about Ginny is she able to open up fully? She and Harry have admitted that they most likely wont share everything but this is a major motivator to her and I, personally, believe that it should be shared. The many facets of her are amazing, but to me it makes more sense now on why she acts like she does compared to at the beginning. If I had to comment on the Malfoy flashblack (?) I would put it earlier in the story so that it allows us to see a little more of her and why she acts like she does and why her first question to Harry was can you teach me to do that (fighting)?
Waiting for the next chapter.
Well I've reread your story now. A thumbs up to the changes. The story is clearer and moves along at a smoother pace. You still have a tendency to get into a lot of detail but the story is enjoyable and I am looking forward to more.
The debt does not allow us to dictate which Weasley child, only that the heir of the Weasley Family is not eligible to satisfy the weregeld. They lack the wherewithal to do anything but endower for servitude. We are offering better than servitude but requiring the obligation be met.”
My english isn't good enough to undertsand it totally. And also when I looked at En-Ru dictionary I found that the word "weregeld" is absent, but "geld" means castrate . While there's also "wergild" means redemption/buy-out etc. So can you please explain in a bit simplier words, or at least explain the meaning of the word in question?
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Still working my way through previous chapters to get back in the world of this story.
