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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 27th October 2009 17:52


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 2197

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
wow! nice story! I loved it! Very interesting and different! I hope you write more in this AU!
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aharkins
Tuesday 27th October 2009 11:56


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 161

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
Not your best work. It seemed like you were just throwing out words to get to the end of the story.
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bcollins
Sunday 25th October 2009 10:15


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 85

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
WOW !!! I hope you write more and don't leave it like this but the story was great !
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elroon76
Saturday 17th October 2009 15:47


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 13

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
great story. Can't wait for the next chapter
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aimless`
Saturday 17th October 2009 09:48


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 88

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
Since story now is marked "completed" I guess we won't know, but can assume he did. Rather abrupt ending tbh. And the point of it this way is unclear, becouse there is so much far ahead... Quite evil of you to make their love the reason of deaths which originally didn't occure.

Is it a mistake with "completed" sign though? on siye it's marked complited too. :|

All he'd have to do is just give himself a bit of a push.



English shortening :S. This " 'd " states for "would" or "had" ?
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Dad
Saturday 17th October 2009 06:45


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 224

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
That was a very worrying ending to the chapter. He is not going to do anything silly, is he?
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LeprechaunJV
Saturday 17th October 2009 01:06


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 87

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends

So Tom Riddels' hold on Ron isn't completely gone till he learns to forgive himself. I guess this will return to haunt Ron in later chapters. Hope the friendship between him and the others will not be at an end as i guess it'll be that friendship that will actually help him get over this issue.
Update soon!
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aimless`
Friday 16th October 2009 16:53


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 88

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
Ineteresting, very inetersting.
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Patches
Friday 16th October 2009 15:20


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 952

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
Thsi is a very good chapter. A lot of problems solved but a major one still to be solved. How can anyone help Ron? Has he absorbed the Horcrux? I'm glad that Dumbledore let Harry know no one would be punished for what happened. I like the way that Harry bought Dobbie and "Mandy" from Lucius Malfoy for 3 knuts. Dobby won't be tortured by the Malfoy's anymore. I feel so sorry for Ron. He has a huge burden and if he doesn't ask for help he will be lost. I look foward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. p
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saulick
Friday 16th October 2009 06:59


3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 130

18: Nothing Ever Really Ends
Hmmmm, a dark ending to a dark story. Hopefully Ron's parents will intercede. I think if anyone needed their memory altered it would be Ron. A well written and thought provoking chapter.
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