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moralitas
Sunday 23rd August 2009 16:12
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 34
| Five Times Two |
lol, very funny. a nice, light hearted read.  |
aurora luminis
Thursday 10th September 2009 22:15 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
Love your name! You might enjoy some of my other pieces...they are not many, so it would not be to big an investment of time. I will be posting this on the site as well. I'm driving of a few more chapters, at least two. Wish me luck and thank you for taking the time to review. It has been a big encouragement for me.
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| book770
Monday 27th July 2009 11:55
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Five Times Two |
WOW! Being a young author i understand the time and effort that writing this has taken. I am currently writing three different story's (not on phoenixsong) and while i cant expect you to feel what i feel while writing i know that for me writing can be slightly stressful when you are not in the world your characters create. so i would like to congratulate you on writing such a wonderful H/G fantasy. While i greatly enjoyed reading this i do with it was slightly longer because for my it ended far too soon.
~sage |
aurora luminis
Thursday 10th September 2009 22:21 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
Well, I am going to try to write two more chapters. That was not part of the original plan, but there has been so much response that what else can I do? Thank you for taking the time to review. What you will find with writing is this: the story --the basic bones-- really writes itself. Honest. Sometimes you sit there dumb as the characters take over. To do something here in Hogwarts, it helps to just think of little pieces of magic all your own...doing that increases the ability to think creatively about magic and suddenly there she is: that big, big bat batting her eyes. I think you might enjoy some of my other pieces, I only have a few so it is no big deal timewise. Again, thanks for reading and enjoying!  |
| queenbee23
Thursday 9th April 2009 08:28
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Five Times Two |
| that was really good can you make a part 2 |
| queenbee23
Thursday 9th April 2009 08:28
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Five Times Two |
| that was really good can you make a part 2 |
| queenbee23
Thursday 9th April 2009 08:28
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Five Times Two |
| that was really good can you make a part 2 |
aurora luminis
Thursday 10th September 2009 22:30 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| I hope to write a sequel, maybe even several chapters. That was not in the original blueprint, but so many have asked, that I feel I should make the effort....which of course could fail utterly. Thank you for reviewing! |
| worleybird
Wednesday 25th February 2009 16:10
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Five Times Two |
I love this story. It's awesome and I wish you would write a sequal or something...  |
aurora luminis
Thursday 10th September 2009 22:27 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| Well, say a few good incantations for me, because after so many request, I really am going to try to add two or three chapters to is. It is a gift to know that you love the story. I enjoyed writing it. Hogwarts is my home away from home! Thank you for reviewing. |
| mugglemom
Friday 6th February 2009 17:33
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 10 | Five Times Two |
| Abso-freakin'-lutely HILARIOUS! |
aurora luminis
Thursday 10th September 2009 22:25 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| I just love this: that so many found it hilarious, funny, vastly amusing. If you knew how hard I was chewing on my fingernails about writing a piece that was strictly comical. I only have four pieces on Phoenixsong --and none anywhere else-- and while three of them definitely have light spots for laughter, I never thought I could carry off something that was strictly humor...and yet now without a piece of life lesson in it. Thank you for reading. Thank you for reviewing. |
| GinevraMollyWeasley
Monday 12th January 2009 15:30
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 67 | Five Times Two |
| Looved it!! |
aurora luminis
Saturday 17th January 2009 02:08 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for reviewing and even more for loving the story. I confess that I am a mite attached to it myself. It is wonderful to laugh. |
| Grandma Kate
Tuesday 23rd December 2008 03:14
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 793 | Five Times Two |
| Very good reading. I am sorry I missed it the first time around. |
aurora luminis
Sunday 4th January 2009 05:35 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
Thank you for taking the time. Given the wonderful work you are giving us in Ginny's Fifth Year, I really appreciate what it means to stop and read others, leave reviews etc. Writing well, as you do, does take time. Phoenix Song is a wonderful place to live!  |
| Felix Felicis
Monday 15th December 2008 17:00
4th year
Num. of Reviews: 191 | Five Times Two |
| What a great story! I can't believe I haven't read it before now. There's nothing like seeing Ginny show her fiesty side now and then. Shame she didn't get to go through with her original plan but I think this impressed Harry more than she knew. It was truly enjoyable reading this. Thanks for the entertainment! |
aurora luminis
Sunday 4th January 2009 05:31 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
Well, first of all it is an honor to have such a response from a well known PS author. That is very encouraging. Yes, I love a fiesty Ginny. Only someone with true grit could have struggled as she did in book two...tossing the book down the toliet took a great amount of fighter's blood. I am so glad you enjoyed it.  |
| DukeBrymin
Friday 12th December 2008 09:20
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80 | Five Times Two |
| Screamingly funny, very enjoyable, yet needs to be continued--I would love to see your take on how Ginny finally gets Harry. |
aurora luminis
Sunday 4th January 2009 05:27 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
I do hope to continue in hidden moments, but really, can anything beat JKR's own description of how Ginny finally gets her man: right there in front of the whole Gryffindor crowd! Thank you so much for taking the time to review. It really does make a person want to head for the pencil and pad. |
| ibelieveintruelove
Tuesday 9th December 2008 19:52
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 239 | Five Times Two |
| Hahaha serves you right Dean!! lol I love that Mrs. Weasley has a list, and Ginny is downright scary! I really wanted a kiss though! lol Good job! |
aurora luminis
Sunday 4th January 2009 05:24 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
thanks for the encouragement! I haven't managed a kiss yet in my small collection of HP fics...but I am moving toward it. Yes, Mrs. Weasley's list: I really would love to develop it sometime. Ginny's own version of lesson in defense against....  |
| majolie
Sunday 30th November 2008 17:39
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 474 | Five Times Two |
| Very cute. Always nice to see a missing moment. I belong to the camp (if there is one?) believing Dean did nothing really wrong while with Ginny - he just was not Mr. Right. So the hex was a bit of an extreme surprise, but still quite amusing. Nicely written too. |
aurora luminis
Sunday 4th January 2009 04:23 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| Well, many a boy would say that Dean 'did nothing wrong', it just depends on what your personal system is. As an older woman I feel truly sorry for young girls today who have a very nuanced view of what a girl should be pushed down their throats...I'm not so sure we are freer than we were in '67. Thank you for taking the time to review. Since it was my first attempt at humor I really appreciate knowing I didn't fail completely |
| Natalie-
Sunday 23rd November 2008 04:47
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Five Times Two |
| I really like this, it's funny Good work. |
aurora luminis
Monday 24th November 2008 09:13 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| Natalie, thank you for taking time to let me hear that you enjoyed the piece. While the real reward is always in the doing, I can honestly say that hearing reader's reactions is also a powerful potion. Definitely I feel encouraged to try some more humor. |
| Auntie Minerva
Friday 21st November 2008 05:19
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 9 | Five Times Two |
| What a fun story! I especially enjoyed the idea of variations on the bat bogey hex! Characterizations were better than recognizable, and I loved the emotions underlying the horseplay. A fun romp. Keep up the good work! |
aurora luminis
Monday 24th November 2008 09:11 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| p.s. from a.l. : Goodness!!! This is your first review and I have it! That is better than any Oscar! Again, thank you. |
| The Doctor
Saturday 11th October 2008 07:10
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5 | Five Times Two |
| Really, really funny. Will probably get my vote for the "get your hands of harry's wand line." |
aurora luminis
Sunday 16th November 2008 01:38 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| Thanks so much for taking the time to live a line. It did make my day. Even though I came in at last place (this is the third time I have entered a PS Challenge and the third time I came in last), I feel the piece was successful in that so many found it funny. It is also my first attempt to right humor. Again, thank you. |
| Ladybug
Friday 10th October 2008 21:39
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375 | Five Times Two |
| I love how besotted Harry is and all he can manage to do is smile and um an er about the place - while Ginny's a little more devious in her besottedness - except when her impulsiveness gets the better of her! I love her little whisper to Harry at the end ... maybe she didn't plan it, but I think it did the trick! Well done on a fun and fluffy tale. |
aurora luminis
Sunday 16th November 2008 01:40 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
Your name fits you: a lady to the very heart. Thanks for the encouraging review. Yes, I tried to be faithful to JKR’s characterizations. It is a package deal in my understanding of fanfiction: writing in the form and spirit of the one admired. Making something new yet totally organic vis a vis the original. Thank you for taking the time to review.  |
| Rani
Thursday 9th October 2008 00:36
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2 | Five Times Two |
| Absolutely wonderful! |
aurora luminis
Sunday 16th November 2008 01:42 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
Oh, I was a little jealous when I saw I was your second ever review at PS. Somehow the thought of being the first in this would mean more than first in other ways. Thank you so much for the encouragement.  |
| lety77_7
Monday 6th October 2008 00:12
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 7 | Five Times Two |
Absolutely hilarious!! I can't wait to find out who you are, so I can read any other stories you have on this site.  |
aurora luminis
Sunday 16th November 2008 01:43 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
Oh dear, I am afraid you will be disappointed when you read the other three pieces I have posted here. This was my first go at humor. Actually, this was my first piece of fanfiction, written on a wave of high irritation when a favorite author turned the the common room into a….. Best left unsaid. There is some humor in two of the other pieces, but the third is as poignant as this is funny. I loved the smiley you used. It means a good deal that others enjoyed it.  |
| Dad
Friday 3rd October 2008 11:31
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 224 | Five Times Two |
Good, funny, well writen - great stuff.
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aurora luminis
Sunday 16th November 2008 01:45 | Five Times Two (Author Response) |
| Thanks, Dad, for reviewing. Uh, I think my own Dad would have also liked it. Most appreciated is the remark that it is ‘well-written’. Whenever I finish a piece I am torn between amazement and consternation. Two different ways to say: “I wrote that?” |
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