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bcollins
Sunday 1st November 2009 21:24


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 85

An Unceremonious Beginning
AWWWWWW how sweeet.
Thanks for this story, it's very touching
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heyy
Sunday 4th October 2009 10:02


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 2

An Unceremonious Beginning
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ThePhoenixLament
Monday 27th July 2009 12:38


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 1

An Unceremonious Beginning
brilliant
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Najam
Friday 12th June 2009 05:47


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 4

An Unceremonious Beginning
that was so good ....thanks a lot...I have always liked your writing style.
Kezzabear
Friday 12th June 2009 05:53
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
Oh hai! Thank you v. much!!! I am glad you enjoyed!
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Lolipop
Monday 20th April 2009 02:31


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 7

An Unceremonious Beginning
"...and I'm not allowed to teach you how to fly."
Giggle! This whole story is so sweet. Thanks!!
Kezzabear
Friday 12th June 2009 05:54
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
I'm glad you like the fic! It was a joy to write!
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DukeBrymin
Friday 12th December 2008 08:57


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80

An Unceremonious Beginning
I really love this story--very sweet, very in character.
My one nit is the part where Harry is heading back to the burrow--starts out: "he didn't know how they got back to the Burrow." Then is mentioned things he _does_ remember, then it says: Nor did Harry recall how... It seems somewhat confused to me. The "Nor" in that statement seems to indicate a continuing series of things he doesn't remember, yet it comes right after two things he _does_ remember.
Anyway, great story!
Kezzabear
Friday 12th June 2009 05:56
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
I am easily confused ... *sheepish* But I'm glad you liked teh fic!
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hihavaniceda
Monday 1st December 2008 04:11


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 177

An Unceremonious Beginning
Hi, I needed a Harry Potter quick fix and I just clicked ramdomly at a story that was completed and not to long ..... and I clicked on yours ......well .. I do hope that you have written other stories as I am now going to check you out .. as Ron would say .. that was bl00dy brillent !

Thank you !
Kezzabear
Monday 1st December 2008 04:16
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
I have written a lot of other things however they are not archived here. I am glad you enjoyed this snippet of my writing
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hihavaniceda
Monday 1st December 2008 04:11


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 177

An Unceremonious Beginning
Hi, I needed a Harry Potter quick fix and I just clicked ramdomly at a story that was completed and not to long ..... and I clicked on yours ......well .. I do hope that you have written other stories as I am now going to check you out .. as Ron would say .. that was bl00dy brillent !

Thank you !
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Ebonyrose28
Saturday 22nd November 2008 20:49


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

An Unceremonious Beginning
Wow that was a great story and i really enjoyed it.
Kezzabear
Thursday 27th November 2008 18:18
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
I'm glad. I enjoyed writing it.
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majolie
Saturday 1st November 2008 16:21


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 474

An Unceremonious Beginning
This was just lovely. Thank you for writing it.
Kezzabear
Tuesday 4th November 2008 02:34
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
I'm glad you enjoyed it - and you're welcome!
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RhiannonMei
Wednesday 15th October 2008 18:56


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

An Unceremonious Beginning
Awww Kezza!!!!!! I loved it so much!!! It was so sweet how Harry knew Ginny was in labor, and I grinned viciously when he was angry at the Minister. This is so great! I think I especially love the last line, when Ron said he wasn't allowed to teach Lily how to fly, because it seemed so like him. Fantastic story, Kez .

*tacklehugglespounces*

~ June

Kezzabear
Thursday 16th October 2008 02:39
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
Thanks, dear! It seems the last line is indeed a winner!
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Miri
Wednesday 15th October 2008 17:05


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 47

An Unceremonious Beginning
Congratulations Kezza! I was hesitating between this one and another one but voted for this one because it gave Harry what he's always wanted..a family. But I will say I didn't recognize it as yours.

I loved the interaction between Harry and all the children in the scene where he's reading to them...it was so full of quiet emotion. And so was Ron's interaction with the children--that last line was a classic and made me laugh.

The interaction with Harry and Ginny was great too. Thought she was going to put one over on him did she? And George really should have known better.

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Kathryn
Wednesday 15th October 2008 13:58


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 49

An Unceremonious Beginning
I've been waiting to review this piece for obvious reasons, but I knew despite my very poor form at reviewing I wanted to write on for this. It is a really good fic that includes so many different emotions and has the characters so well written as well as some very witty lines. But I think my favourite part to it is that Harry and Ginny finally get that good Halloween, I mean what with everything that has happened to Harry on that day and it being the anniversary of Ginny first opening the chamber of secrets, it was hardly a happy holiday. Hopefully that will change now. A very worthy winner.
Kezzabear
Thursday 16th October 2008 07:34
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
I think it will change now and it will be a very happy day indeed! Poor harry's had a bad run on Hallowe'en ... not any more! Thanks for the review and congrats back atcha!
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parakletos
Wednesday 15th October 2008 12:34


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 203

An Unceremonious Beginning
I should stop by more often, then I might have spotted this :-)

Excellent as ever.
Kezzabear
Wednesday 15th October 2008 16:21
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
Ah ... but would you have recognised it as mine? (Probably lol) I do strive for excellence .. I'm sure that's someone's school motto ...
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The Doctor
Saturday 11th October 2008 07:09


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 5

An Unceremonious Beginning
Sweet. A nice change of pace from the laugh-a-second fics which make up the lions share of the fics. Well done
Kezzabear
Thursday 16th October 2008 07:35
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
Thank you!
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Ladybug
Friday 10th October 2008 22:00


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 375

An Unceremonious Beginning
Such a sweet and enjoyable story - plenty of humour and not too treacly - in fact, just right! I can't tell you my favourite parts as I'd be repeating the whole story back at you! Lovely, thank you for sharing it with us.
Kezzabear
Thursday 16th October 2008 07:36
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
I enjoyed sharing it - thanks for enjoying it with me!
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lety77_7
Thursday 9th October 2008 02:00


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 7

An Unceremonious Beginning
Okay! This one is my favorite of all the stories written for this challenge. It's got my vote. The birth of Harry and Ginny's little girl gives him a beautiful memory of Halloween at last.
Kezzabear
Thursday 16th October 2008 07:37
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
Yay for happy memories!
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harry_ginnyfan
Tuesday 7th October 2008 19:36


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 190

An Unceremonious Beginning
Very cute! Great job!!

Kezzabear
Thursday 16th October 2008 07:38
An Unceremonious Beginning (Author Response)
Thanks!
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drummersgirl
Monday 6th October 2008 08:06


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 37

An Unceremonious Beginning
This was so cute!!! Love the OBHWF!!
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ksingh
Saturday 4th October 2008 22:10


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 31

An Unceremonious Beginning
Nicely done. I even teared up at the naming of Lily.
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