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St Margarets
Tuesday 10th November 2009 15:50


2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 53

1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In
What a vivid opening of a lazy Saturday. I like how you incorporated some new canon into this - like Sirius's posters.

This is a great line that encapsulates that teenage enthusiasm:

Gryffindor girls... Swimming… A flash of spring fever flared in James’s chest.

Zia Montrose
Tuesday 10th November 2009 19:09		1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In (Author Response)
Hi Mary! I always try for vivid so I'm glad to hear it came across that way.

Sirius's posters just fit the occasion too well for me to leave out. I have to steal my previous reviewer's line and say there's "nothing like girls in swimsuits to motivate."

Thanks so much for your review!
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Patches
Saturday 31st October 2009 02:27


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 952

1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In
Ahhh! The boys have incentive to get up and get moving. Nothing like girls in swimsuits to motivate! I look forward to more. Thanks for writing. p
Zia Montrose
Saturday 31st October 2009 08:57		1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In (Author Response)
Nothing like girls in swimsuits to motivate!


*snickers* Yes, exactly! Thank you for review. I'm happy to hear you're enjoying following the boys along on their Saturday antics.
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Patches
Friday 25th September 2009 03:00


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 952

1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In
This is a great image of a day in the Marauders life! I can see the 4 boys showing off for the "Griff girls"! A fun day for teenagers. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more. p
Zia Montrose
Friday 25th September 2009 17:24		1: A Saturday Morning Lie-In (Author Response)
This is a great image of a day in the Marauders life!


I'm so glad you think so! As the author, the upcoming Ch3 (in beta at present) is my favorite, so I hope you'll stay tuned for it. Thanks for letting me know you enjoyed.
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