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anniep
Saturday 27th December 2014 09:55


4th year
Num. of Reviews: 167

Stronger and Harder Than A Bad Girl's Dream
Great story, as usual. Love your creativity and execution.

Ginny invented the time turner for herself and Harry. Does that mean if he'd offered it to Hermione, she could not have used it?

Thanks for sharing!
parakletos
Saturday 27th December 2014 18:12
Stronger and Harder Than A Bad Girl's Dream (Author Response)
Great story, as usual. Love your creativity and execution.

Ginny invented the time turner for herself and Harry. Does that mean if he'd offered it to Hermione, she could not have used it?

Thanks for sharing!


Thanks for your kind words.

A good question. Tricky thing time travel, especially devices created for a particular need. I think if he'd offered it to Hermione she would have given her a slap round the head and taken it from him!

Thanks for stopping by and reviewing,
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Dad
Monday 10th November 2014 04:22


Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 518

Stronger and Harder Than A Bad Girl's Dream
A little confusing, but fun.
parakletos
Monday 10th November 2014 05:19
Stronger and Harder Than A Bad Girl's Dream (Author Response)
A little confusing, but fun.


I think you've just come up with a definition of time travel.

Thanks for reading.
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Felix Felicis
Sunday 9th November 2014 04:43


5th year
Num. of Reviews: 214

Stronger and Harder Than A Bad Girl's Dream
Interesting perspective. There are a lot of fun things you can do with a time turner and you managed to make it both interesting and fun. I especially liked how Harry admittedly didn't have a clue whether using it would affect his other self or the future or past.

Nice work and thanks for sharing!
parakletos
Sunday 9th November 2014 17:06
Stronger and Harder Than A Bad Girl's Dream (Author Response)
Interesting perspective. There are a lot of fun things you can do with a time turner and you managed to make it both interesting and fun. I especially liked how Harry admittedly didn't have a clue whether using it would affect his other self or the future or past.

Nice work and thanks for sharing!


I think you could write a whole series of fics based around having a timeturner like this, some fun and some serious, so hopefully I got the balance right here.

Thanks for taking the time to review
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Marinka
Saturday 8th November 2014 17:34


1st year
Num. of Reviews: 17

Stronger and Harder Than A Bad Girl's Dream
Wow, this potentially could be another novel, so many possibilities! I loved the inventiveness of Ginny,how did she got him to travel to selected time points? Did she pre-set the time turner to travel to periods she wanted him to see?
parakletos
Saturday 8th November 2014 23:00
Stronger and Harder Than A Bad Girl's Dream (Author Response)
Wow, this potentially could be another novel, so many possibilities! I loved the inventiveness of Ginny,how did she got him to travel to selected time points? Did she pre-set the time turner to travel to periods she wanted him to see?


Well, as this was only ever meant to be a one shot you will probably never get to know the answers to your questions.

That said, the device fed off the desires of those who created and those who used it.

Thanks for taking the time to drop by and review.
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