I LOVE Mrs. Weasley. I love the idea of her keeping busy to "build up her rant." It's amazing reading this after the series is complete and see all the areas where you were right about things.
I like the view of Molly being so concerned about Harry, and Ginny's concern not only for Harry, but for her Mum. There even a little Ron / Hermione reference thrown in.
As I've said on some of your short stories, I always like Ginny's POV - she deserves some center stage time!
Your Molly is the perfect mother hen, as always! And Ginny, I just can't wait to see what she's got planned. I read this story forever ago, but I can't remember it at all, just that I loved it. Can't wait to fall for it again!
Aww, poor Molly. I sure hope Harry writes her soon. Even if he doesn't write anyone else, at least let her know how he's doing.
"Ginny to the rescue!" What a great way to introduce Ginny into the story. Dating Dean, but willing to focus her energy to helping Harry. Although she says it's for her mom's well being, but we all know her hearts says different.
Great story so far.
Your exclamation point addiction? l0l I had one of those once... Now that I've gotten over that, I just have a '...' addiction.
Anyway, great chapter. I love the beginning of the Ron/Ginny scene; how he teased her and all... So far I like the story and I like how descriptive you've been. Some stories are really great but so non-descriptive that you just want to stop reading but you can't because you love the story line (if that even makes any sense...).
Harry is being really dumb. Everyone is being hurt and are disapointed with Harry's decitions. He should pucker up and go bake to Grimuled Place just so he CAN see Sirius again. But that is just my opinion.
Hmm another great chapter. I really like where you are going with this. But Dumbledore seems like a manipulative old man like in so many fics nowadays. Oh well!
This is my first visit to a fanfiction website, and I have to say: if the rest of the stories are anything like yours, I'm going to be hooked. The characters seem true, and your writing is very engaging. Keep up the good work!
I can absolutely see Molly Weasley setting herself up as Harry advocate, however, I also can see her as she is portayed as Dolenbyrd does over on SIYE in his story Becoming where she tries to shield the children to the point that she can harm them. All in all another excellent chapter.
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please write more soon!!!