I read this story a very long time ago and loved it, I just found it again while reorganising some links and it looks like I never reviewed. I can't seem to save it to favourites--does PSnet have a favourites option?--so I'll keep the link and read again soon!
Hey there. I just finished your story and I have to say I was totally
amazed. I've never read a story that captured my attention so much, and
I have to say I am very very impressed with your characterizations.
Eagerly anticipating the rest.
Chary Friday 29th April 2005 04:52
1: Dudley’s Eggs (Author Response)
Thank you very much, Nonny. I always worried that I was risking making everyone horribly out of character because I was writing a romance. It's always nice to hear I didn't go too badly wrong! I'll try not to keep you waiting too much longer now.
I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your story. I acutally stayed up most of the night to read it only to find one of the most evil cliffhangers I have seen! I hope you will update soon and reveal what happens to Lois. Maybe I am an incurable romantic but I hope you will find some way to save her. (And never mind about "far-fetched-ness", its all about magic after all!)
Amongst the many, many nice turns of phrase you used I particularly liked Severus' natural pessimism lifting its head and sniffing the air! (Sorry I butchered it but I can't find the actual quote at the moment).