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majolie
Saturday 29th March 2008 18:17
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 474
| Seedlings Turn Overnight |
| I was looking for some Neville tonight and found this. Lovely. |
Kelleypen
Saturday 29th March 2008 20:31 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much. I had a lot of fun writing it. I love Neville. |
| myketje
Monday 25th June 2007 06:57
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 112 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
Great!! Absolutly brilliant!!
Neville is my favorite Gryffindor and you just showed it!!
thxs! looking forward to the next!!
xxx
me |
Kelleypen
Saturday 29th March 2008 20:30 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I love Neville too.
I just noticed all the reviews from a year ago . . . I didn't know about them. Think I should respond a whole year later? |
| No Idea Why I Smile
Friday 13th April 2007 17:20
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 66 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
Awww...i started crying when neville talked about what happened...it was really sweet, and i loved it.
I absolutely love neville, so this just made my day...i love it. and i did not miss the fact that his wand holds a phoenix feather, whether that was signifigant or not, i dont much care...
I loved it!
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| hahaheeheehaha
Sunday 25th March 2007 04:12
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 49 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
| aww its so sweet. neville finally stood up to his gran and she now knows he is a good wizard! *hugs neville* thanks for writing keep up the good work |
| Katn255
Saturday 3rd March 2007 19:52
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 8 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
wow. it's so great to see neville grown up and standing up to his gran.  |
| mskris16
Friday 2nd March 2007 18:20
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 3 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
What a wonderful story...keep up the great work |
| Grandma Kate
Wednesday 28th February 2007 19:14
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 793 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
| What a good Neville you write! |
| Arnel
Tuesday 27th February 2007 06:45
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 532 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
| First of all, congratulations on having this story become Story of the Week! This is the second time I've read it and it's melted my heart toward Neville all over again. I really like his more mature attitude; his experiences with the DA and in the DoM seem to have given him a confidence that was lacking before. I also was encouraged by Augusta's change in attitude toward the end. If I'm correct, she was still holding onto her image of Neville as a helpless little boy who needed all the protection she could give him until she overheard him at St. Mungo's. As a parent, I know that feeling and how hard it is to let go of a child and let him try his own wings. I think she and Neville will be closer now that they seem to have come to an understanding. And whatever Neville does in the future in this war, I know she'll be proud of him. Wonderful story... |
Kelleypen
Tuesday 27th February 2007 08:50 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Thank you for your wonderfully detailed review. Yes, Gran finally let go of that image of Neville when she heard him with his parents. |
| Lily Flower
Monday 26th February 2007 10:51
3rd year
Num. of Reviews: 144 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
I love this story. It is very nicely written and a good lost moment between books that shows how Neville grew up after the fight. Good job!
Lils |
Kelleypen
Tuesday 27th February 2007 08:47 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much for your review. |
| amamama
Sunday 18th February 2007 15:31
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 439 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
Oh, so lovely, lovely, lovely! Loved it all! Neville being able to stand up to his grandmum, his realizing that she is, after all, old and frail. And his rather one-sided conversation with is mum and dad. *sniff* Absolutely wonderful!
Thanks for sharing.
Cheers! |
Kelleypen
Tuesday 27th February 2007 08:45 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Amamama, you're very sweet to review this. Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. |
| takon65
Monday 12th December 2005 21:12
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 80 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
I'm a Neville-Fan from way back. The story showed our hero in the light he deserved.
And curses, curses upon y'all. It was so well written, it made me tear up on more than one occasion.
More please?
Sam |
Kelleypen
Tuesday 27th February 2007 08:43 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Sam, I missed your review. I'm sorry. Thank you so much for reviewing. I have a soft spot for Neville too. |
| saugart
Saturday 23rd July 2005 19:17
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 71 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
A gripping tale and a good portrayal of Neville. I've always had a soft spot for that character. Good for him.
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Kelleypen
Sunday 24th July 2005 13:53 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much. I think there are quite a few of us with soft spots for Neville. |
| jeanne
Saturday 16th July 2005 06:21
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 491 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
| This was absolutely superb. A real thought provoking piece.So poignant. Thank-you. There is so much more to Neville than everyone gives him credit for. You brought out all his new found strengths,so long stifled by his gran.Trying to protect him,she really retarded his mental and emotional growth,and at least supporting Harry has given him a chance to "grow" in many ways.Great Ficlet. |
Kelleypen
Sunday 24th July 2005 13:55 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| It was fun to look at Neville and try to figure out what choices and what elements of his past and present influenced him to be the way he is. Thank you for reviewing. |
| sonicdale
Friday 15th July 2005 13:10
Hogwarts alumni
Num. of Reviews: 510 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
Sweet. Very sweet. I fully expect Neville to be a large part of the story, canon wise, before the end. He's too much of a great guy to be in the shadows forever.
Good work! Love the wand choosing part the best. |
Kelleypen
Friday 15th July 2005 13:34 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Thanks! The wand part was the most fun part to write. |
| Jedione
Friday 15th July 2005 12:19
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 40 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
Very Nice Kelley, it seems your Neville has had quite an Epihany! Wonderful story Kel, thanks for posting it.
Great Job! |
Kelleypen
Friday 15th July 2005 13:03 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| I couldn't imagine going through fifth year and the events at the ministry without being changed. I hope Jo agrees with me. |
| DADAGinny
Friday 15th July 2005 12:08
6th year
Num. of Reviews: 277 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
Oh! That was so good! I loved to see Neville standing up to his Gran, to have her see how much Neville had changed!
I also liked the fact that Neville also got a Phoenix core -- interesting.
This was great!
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Kelleypen
Friday 15th July 2005 13:02 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much, Java! Have fun tonight. |
| St Margarets
Friday 15th July 2005 11:09
2nd year
Num. of Reviews: 53 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
There's just something about Neville that tugs at the heartstrings. Thanks for not making Gran a complete shrew like so many fan fics. I liked your choice of a wand for him and his mother's maiden name. Very fitting.
It would be cool if Neville's plant was like a guard plant - unlike the other one that killed what-his-name at Christmas in OotP. Hopefully we'll find out more about Neville's plant and Neville in just a few hours!
Thanks for this thoughtful one-shot! |
Kelleypen
Friday 15th July 2005 13:00 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| You're the only reviewer who caught on about the Marjoribanks name so far. Smart woman. You do know that you write the most amazing fan fics--as in you're in my top three of HP fanfic writers. Anyway, writing a Neville fic that pleases you is very gratifying. Thank you so much for your review. |
| Bring and Fly
Friday 15th July 2005 08:37
5th year
Num. of Reviews: 201 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
Ah, I love the way Neville stand on his own two feet in this; the firm but calm way he takes charge warms the heart and is good to see. I especially loved the bit about Gran seeing the fleeting reflection of her son in him--that was poignant.
The whole tone is warm and affectionate and I soooo hope we get to see something like this in a few hours. *Squeeeee*Bounces*
I too think that Neville will be at Harry's back come the showdown --and the title was perfection ! |
Kelleypen
Friday 15th July 2005 10:00 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| Thank you. Coming from a pro like you, this was extremely gratifying. "In just a few more hours . . ." hear Alfred P. Dolittle singing? I'm so hyper. |
| Hoss
Friday 15th July 2005 05:59
| Seedlings Turn Overnight |
That was realy GOOD. Hope to see more of this story. Thanks |
Kelleypen
Friday 15th July 2005 06:11 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
| I'll see if there's more after HBP comes out. It was intended as a one shot--but you never know. |
| misslara
Friday 15th July 2005 03:40
1st year
Num. of Reviews: 18 | Seedlings Turn Overnight |
I was really impressed reading this. I have a soft spot for Neville as I'm sure others do as well. It's nice to see a glimpse into what going to the DoM did to and for him.
I would imagine it would make him more self assured and confident. I really enjoyed how you made him more self aware and confident in his abilities. He's not the kind of boy to mouth of to his gran but he would be more vocal aobut his wishes.
Your words made a simple glimpse into daily life a powerful story through the emotions you managed to convey. Again, very impressive. |
Kelleypen
Friday 15th July 2005 06:10 | Seedlings Turn Overnight (Author Response) |
Your review was well thought out and very gratifying. Thank you so much. |
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