Great chapter, the part where the dragon died and you had the "pull
yourself together" line, I dunno it didn't seem to fit because I guess
I Wasn't feeling that Jade was flipping out. Keep up the great work
nonetheless!
-Jake
Sassenach Thursday 22nd September 2005 16:29
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Thanks for the feedback. I'll try to be more authentic next time when Jade starts to "flip out". Thanks again!
As I may have mentioned before, I generally stick to reading
Harry/Ginny stories, but this one has really drawn me in. :-)
Sassenach Sunday 18th September 2005 08:01
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Awesome! I've kind of seen from the amount of reviews I've gotten that generally everyone sticks to H/G stories. Personally, I think it's a shame because all you're getting is the same stuff regurgitated.
I just wish everyone else would give this story a chance like you have. Thanks a lot!
Well, well, well.... Coming along quite nicely, aren't we? This
fic, and the slowly growing romance, is indeed growing in a way that
pleases me most. Poor Jade, trying to talk herself out of having
anything but platonic feelings for Charlie. Nice to know that
Charlie has it equally bad. I really like how you portray the
different events, everything feels quite real to me. The way it
is done... nothing is forced, and they behave like I would expect RL
dragonriders to behave, you know - trying to protect her while still
demanding that she's just as good as or even better than the
guys. Men at traditional, male dominated work places do indeed
behave like that.
Well done! Thanks for sharing - as always I look forward to the next update.
Berte
Sassenach Saturday 17th September 2005 10:48
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Thanks! I really do put a lot of thought into everything. It's very hard to imagine certain tasks and jobs Dragon Riders would do in their everyday life.
Check back for an update next friday! Thanks again!
Berte