Nice gripping segment with Harry and Ginny . The scene with the muggle minister was a bit distracting, though entertaining -- doesn't seem to have a function.
I've been away from reading this for a while (waiting for more to get posted), and am back again.
Okay. I liked the reaction of the new Prime. And the older brother. Very good. But I am still a little confused. Hey, but I have 9 more chapters to get un-confused.
Good chapters, though you had some problems with contradicting HBP. If you look back at the first chapter the claim that the magical world woudl not have contaced them before 1990 does not match HBP which says that they always introduce themselves to the new PM, and that they are required to tell them about thigns like "importing dragons" and such.
Good chapters, though you had some problems with contradicting HBP. If you look back at the first chapter the claim that the magical world woudl not have contaced them before 1990 does not match HBP which says that they always introduce themselves to the new PM, and that they are required to tell them about thigns like "importing dragons" and such.
please use question marks in the right way! not like this: I?ll be there didn?t I tell you that! no please do it like this I'LL BE THIERE DIDN'T I TELL YOU THAT! OK
IHateSnakes Thursday 16th March 2006 08:56
2: Awakening (Author Response)
This story has been "proofed" three times and gone through a beta reader, and I still can't find your example. If I was a professional writer I wouldn't be here so how about some slack? If you want to harp on a couple typos please bother someone else. If you REALLY do see the typos, tell me the chapter and cut and paste the text so I can have it fixed.
By the way, "I'LL BE THIERE DIDN'T I TELL YOU THAT!" should read:
"I'll be there, didn't I tell you that?"
and Ginny 
. The scene with the muggle minister was a bit distracting, though entertaining -- doesn't seem to have a function. 
