ionik27
Sunday 31st August 2008 16:14 | Windowpane |
| very nice fic! |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 29th March 2008 15:02 | Windowpane |
not to bad
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gymnastgal19
Thursday 15th November 2007 06:52 | Windowpane |
!!!! WOW! that was well written and i like how you made a fanfic about harry's feelings for ginny!
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LunaLovegood
Sunday 28th August 2005 14:29 | Windowpane |
wow, This story is (my first impulse would be awesome but... I'm going to say..... perfectly heart wrenching, I honestly don't think that you could have done anything better, it was perfect! I loved it very deep and sensitive. Thanks for sharing this with us~
~K~ |
Delfino
Saturday 27th August 2005 12:12 | Windowpane |
Oh...wow. I don't know what to say. Or how to say it. Well, guess I better try:
This is sooooo AMAZING!! It's like a poem, drifting in and out and...and....I don't know how to explain it but this was so confusing that it made sense. Does that sound right? Well, obviously not, but just know that this is wonderful work and it's no surprise to me why it's story of the week!
Delfino |
graup_hagrid
Wednesday 24th August 2005 17:21 | Windowpane |
Very nice fic.
Short and to the point - no messing around here.
And, boy, can I relate. I'll never forget that feeling of being whole for the first time after meeting and marrying my wife.
As far as what you could do better, you might want to consider expanding Harry's musing into a ficlet that shows the 2 halves, the 1 whole, and some of the trevails to reach the state of being complementary (not complimentary).
It would also be interesting to see Ginny's musing as well, and how it would be different. |
x_Rose_x
Tuesday 23rd August 2005 04:30 | Windowpane |
| I love this. It's so different but really cool. Well done!
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critmo
Tuesday 23rd August 2005 01:48 | Windowpane |
| Interesting style, but makes sense and is not necessarily pre-HBP. It could still come true if Harry comes to his senses. - Well done! |
PHsname
Monday 22nd August 2005 11:09 | Windowpane |
very well written...im impressed. |
amamama
Monday 22nd August 2005 10:21 | Windowpane |
Wow... this definitely managed to convay a lot, and in less than 500
words nontheless... I'm amazed. Don't know how this is different
from usual, but I might find out soon.
"He was whole in being not one, but two." Love that one!
Thanks!
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Arnel
Monday 22nd August 2005 06:40 | Windowpane |
| Congratulations on being selected as Author of the Week. I'm off to read your other stories. |
Arnel
Monday 22nd August 2005 06:27 | Windowpane |
| I really liked this little peek into Harry's psyche. You did a nice job of showing how his awakening feelings towards Ginny evolved over time. My favorite line is the last: it shows just what kind of magic love really holds. Good job...bravo! |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:45 | Windowpane |
sorry for so many reviews my laptop is playing up !
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
Cherry
Monday 22nd August 2005 05:43 | Windowpane |
WOW!! great just great! I hope you are doing another one!
Cherry xxx |
pfan2
Monday 22nd August 2005 01:31 | Windowpane |
| oh beautiful ... ;-) |
levotatingT
Saturday 14th May 2005 14:34 | Windowpane |
Very interseting, not what I expected. I wouldn't get into the habit of writing like thos but it was still good for once in a while. I could never write like this without making it sound stupid.
Great job, keep wrting, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
Wild Magelet
Sunday 13th February 2005 05:13 | Windowpane |
| Came across this in my constant search for unread H/G fanfic. I really, really like it. Short, but beautiful and perfect the way it is, actually. Awesome job. |
| Sunday 13th February 2005 11:30 | Windowpane (Author Response) |
| Thanks! |
Bella
Thursday 19th August 2004 12:36 | Windowpane |
| Oh, that was wonderful. I got teary-eyed. I love the part about being whole in two beings.... Just lovely. *sob* Okay. I'll get a grip on myself in a minute, I promise. |
