|
|
|
|
hermione&ginny
Sunday 21st August 2011 16:23 | The Lighthouse | That was so sweet! Harry was starting to wonder just what he'd gotten himself into... | Stormdelver
Tuesday 16th November 2004 18:22 | The Lighthouse | | Ok I like this- very refreshing-Harry as a father figure- this has the makings of an interesting story- so just how does our knight win the heart of fair lass I wonder- keep it comming-very nice | saugart
Tuesday 16th November 2004 10:50 | The Lighthouse | I like the basic premise here. Your writing is a bit uneven, but
that's OK -- you're developing your skills here, so please don't stop!
There's a logic problem here: if you adopt someone, you aren't their
guardian; you're their mother or father. If you want to become
someone's guardian, then you don't adopt them, but they become your
"ward". When you revise this story (you do plan to revise it at
some point) I'd encourage you to think on that.
|
|
