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Sunday 18th May 2008 09:51 | The Year of Secrets | must be nice to spend christmas with just the two of them... good thing they didnt go too far hehe i love how harry needed a cold shower
uh oh thats bad that harry forgot that dream... yikes
| gymnastgal19
Saturday 12th January 2008 22:18 | The Year of Secrets | nice chapter
that ending doesnt sound very good though... harry forgetting that draco was branded as a DE
| alli
Tuesday 11th September 2007 00:38 | The Year of Secrets | | Another great one! | luvjb
Wednesday 15th February 2006 13:12 | The Year of Secrets | | Very good chapter, sorry can't review, want more.....off to read | ridgeback77
Tuesday 27th September 2005 14:32 | The Year of Secrets | | Not bad, but I agree with your A/N. I'm not sure what it is, but
it just doesn't flow as well as the previous chapters. I wish I
could offer some advice, but I can't even bring myself to attempt
writing a fic. On the whole, its still a good chapter.
| DailyProphetReporting
Monday 14th June 2004 06:27 | The Year of Secrets | I've been slowly making my way through this and I really like what I've seen so far.
I'm most impressed with the way you're dealing with Ginny. The conflict between her understanding of Harry's pain and her desire to help against her own needs is really well done. You illustrate that line between loving and wanting to be loved very well.
You've also done a really nice job coping with the brooding, introspective Harry we see in OotP. You blend his protectiveness, his isolation and his quick temper really well. He comes off very much in character.
Anyway, I think this is very well done and am signing off to read more,
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