AllIsFairInLoveAndWar
Monday 11th July 2011 01:27 | This Means War! |
| haha. i LOVE the random Firenze prediction in the middle. |
kopfsalat2000
Friday 19th November 2010 08:25 | This Means War! |
| oh, this story is marvellous!!! I adore your style and your humour! What a fantastic read. |
gymnastgal19
Friday 20th November 2009 20:39 | This Means War! |
hahahahah awesome!
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gymnastgal19
Sunday 14th September 2008 23:02 | This Means War! |
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Prongs739
Saturday 30th August 2008 18:25 | This Means War! |
| The MMail was hilarious! |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 13th July 2008 23:44 | This Means War! |
hahah!!! that was awesome! i kinda wanted to see what would happen though when cho pansy and susan caught up to harry... :p
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Hihavaniceda
Monday 28th April 2008 05:58 | This Means War! |
oh .... love it ! I am so glad I found this .... this is GOOD ! |
Hihavaniceda
Monday 28th April 2008 05:58 | This Means War! |
oh .... love it ! I am so glad I found this .... this is GOOD ! |
Hihavaniceda
Monday 28th April 2008 05:58 | This Means War! |
oh .... love it ! I am so glad I found this .... this is GOOD ! |
Hihavaniceda
Monday 28th April 2008 05:57 | This Means War! |
oh .... love it ! I am so glad I found this .... this is GOOD ! |
Hihavaniceda
Monday 28th April 2008 05:57 | This Means War! |
oh .... love it ! I am so glad I found this .... this is GOOD ! |
harrysnotgoingtodiein7
Tuesday 17th July 2007 09:16 | This Means War! |
SO FUNNY
i couldnt stop laughing LOLOL |
Formiscuse
Thursday 28th June 2007 22:04 | This Means War! |
Hi Jeconais,
Checking the date of the last update, I realize it may have been a while since you've touched this particular story. Be that as it may, I hope you don't mind a little belated feedback.
I am absolutely loving reading This Means War. It's playful, witty, and quite honestly hilarious. I finished reading Half-Blood Prince for the first time only about a week ago, and while my head was still in the clouds, I've been seeking some fiction to prolong my enjoyment of the series. I'm glad your story was one of the first ones I stumbled upon. I'll be hard-pressed to find other stories like this to pass the time until Deathly Hallows arrives.
In any case, I hope you didn't mind some feedback from an appreciative reader. I hope to see more of your talented work as I browse.
Sincerely,
Justin |
eaglesnest
Friday 25th May 2007 00:03 | This Means War! |
| Hilarious catfight for Harry's YES to go to the dance. |
critmo
Friday 2nd February 2007 11:52 | This Means War! |
| A memorable racing scene. Looking forward to the next Ron-Harry interaction. |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 10th October 2006 14:16 | This Means War! |
'Lily's hangdog eyes when he had done something that went a little too far, and James' reproachful look' -- shouldn't this perhaps be 'James' hangdog eyes . . . and Lily's reproachful look'?
Very effective (and humourous) use of repetition in the story of the girls after Harry
The Talk --
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miss_marauder
Monday 9th October 2006 14:45 | This Means War! |
rotfl
haha
omg i was laughing thru this whole chapter =]
lloved it
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daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 9th July 2006 12:30 | This Means War! |
| Why would Padfoot want to burry and bone in a tree? And whoo, so many girls, so little time, literally. Very very good. |
forbesn
Friday 23rd September 2005 15:14 | This Means War! |
This-is-the-best-fanfiction-I've-ever-read! The poetry part- did you make it up? no matter anything you do, it turns out really good! Still, as I have read all of the chapters, and am now going to review them, THe Ball?! it dissappered. a running chase. hm, THe Talk is quite funny, especialy - Padfoot gets in trouble about it. The blackmailing Mmail was pretty interesting, as it shows you put thought into this story. |
00mina00
Saturday 28th May 2005 21:24 | This Means War! |
| That was hillarious!!!! Great really!! Can't wait for the rest!!!
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knockthreetimes
Monday 21st February 2005 01:48 | This Means War! |
This is my favorite Harry and Ginny fic ever!!! Keep up the good work. |
Kelleypen
Friday 31st December 2004 01:20 | This Means War! |
| Well, even if I don't understand why Sirius is alive, I'm thoroughly enjoying his banter in the mmaels. And the four girls racing to ask Harry first was hillarious. |
pixiellie
Wednesday 1st September 2004 15:35 | This Means War! |
Dear Jeconais
Another wonderful chapter! I like how you have Sirius call Harry on his sentimentality. It's something I can picture in cannon as well as underscores Harry having few adult women in his life. I have a small critique, and certainly don't expect you to change anything on my opinion. The emailing seemed to be a bit excessive, but it's a unique plot device and key to your style here.
Does Hermione know Everyone? (G) I love that all these people keep her in the know. She could spy for the Order. It's nice to see a true friendship evolve between Hermione and Ginny independant of the boys. I can picture Ginny needing a girl to confide in that's closer to her own age. As the youngest and only girl of four, I can empathize.
Giggle, Padfoot giving Prongs Jr. a sex talk over whiskey and Ginny getting stealth snogged back both made me laugh. Draco getting kneed for his come on (and comeuppance) was very funny as well. Loved the set up: ". . .Strange cosmic forces are at work." Four girls, four houses one boy. There can be only one. . .
And Dumbledore just happens to be in place to catch the show? Hee Hee. Harry getting tackled and Ron's realization of just what his sister planned was priceless. You've incorporated a great many characters, and although a few seem slightly out of character, it feels to be only a lttle bit of a stretch. The story is well within believablity, at least to me.
Much more humor in this section than the first, establishing post, and now I can't wait to see how Harry and Ginny relate as a couple. More non suprise kissing I hope.
Finally, just to comment on your fundamentals, your spelling, grammar and sentence structure has been very good throughout. The temptation to rush your ideas to your readers must me high, and shortcuts in proofreading tempting. I appreciate you not taking them. (Even as I rush through a cursory proofread of my feed back to you, I can only suggest do as I say. . .G) Clear, fluid prose is always interesting to read, and you combine strong basics with wit and humor and honest puppy love emotion. I can't wait to read chapter three.
Thank you for taking to time to create an interesting and enjoyable story and for sharing it with others. Your a braver man (or woman) than I Gunga Din. .
Sincerely,
pix'ellie |
p0tterfan
Monday 19th July 2004 02:05 | This Means War! |
| Great second chapter too. Must sleep now! |
