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Saturday 1st September 2007 16:32 | But A Shadow | | writen like a pro | XXXmister-E werepony unit
Thursday 2nd February 2006 14:12 | But A Shadow | | | SillyGillie
Thursday 1st December 2005 15:09 | But A Shadow | | What a brilliant job. I loved how the two scenes intertwined with the grasping of the hands, really nice touch. Brilliant. | brad
Wednesday 15th December 2004 22:31 | But A Shadow | Very nice; dark patches, but the warm memories seep through and rule.
"When she lets her hair loose, she is enveloped in flame, and she burns
his darkness away". Shucks, I wish I could write (like
that). I'm just glad I have enough in me to appreciate what
you've written. Very, very nice. Thank you!
| Alexandra Lynch
Monday 14th June 2004 18:15 | But A Shadow | Thank you all, so much. This one germinated off listening to Fleetwood Mac's "Dreams" and getting a review for "Someday" where someone wanted a sequel. It's not a sequel exactly, but it could be in the same universe.
I'm trying the summer angst challenge. (grin) | Pooca
Monday 14th June 2004 17:58 | But A Shadow | | Very poignant, very nice. I love this very poetry-esque style. | Tosca
Monday 14th June 2004 16:12 | But A Shadow | | Oh, I love your work. It's so poetic; it has so much feeling. So wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing it. | Bart
Monday 14th June 2004 16:10 | But A Shadow | | Wonderful stuff | Musings
Monday 14th June 2004 15:01 | But A Shadow | | Wonderful, Alexandra -- just wonderful! |
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