Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 07:12 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 07:12 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 07:12 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 07:12 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
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Stag Writer
Wednesday 4th November 2009 07:12 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 6th November 2007 16:01 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
awww i really liked this! what kinds of flashes??? fireworks or camera?
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pyromain
Monday 3rd September 2007 10:57 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
| loved it, wondering how took the pictures. Gues it would be the twins. |
lacyrachil
Tuesday 12th December 2006 13:16 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
| So...the flashes...Rita Skeeter, possibly? What a snake. Great writing! |
daniel_r_crazy22
Friday 15th September 2006 15:43 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
| Nice. Where those photografers? However you spell it. But very good. |
ImmortalPhoenix
Monday 27th February 2006 20:12 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
The art thing was a little weird but I loved their kiss. Really creative though. And for the third time, great story.
Kortnee |
DADAGinny
Tuesday 16th November 2004 16:40 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
I loved how she got him to at least try to paint! Very
Fluffy! I also liked your comment about locking up Ron and
Hermione! They definately need it!
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pixiellie
Monday 11th October 2004 12:02 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
Another sweet, interesting read. I like the idea of Ginny as
artistic. All that fun and passion I picture her with would need
an outlet besides quidditch and pranks, she's not a copy of the
twins.
Great line with "'Perfect' for Harry meant having his friends close and
his enemies out of his head." Out of his head not thinking of
them, or not being possessed by them?
Nice to see Harry as the one tied up in knots about his feelings,
rather than Ginny. You create an idylic setting, a perfect moment
out of time. Great imagry of Harry's response to Ginny, right
down to the need to kiss her again to prove it's real.
The flashes going off around them make me nervous though. Please don't let the twins have a camera. Grin.
Great job, a fun, fluffy story with a satisfying payoff for the reader. I can't wait to read more.
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Musings
Sunday 20th June 2004 22:49 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss |
| Fluff! Fluff! Kissy, fluffy fluff! I just love it!! Michael, you did such a great job in capturing the warmth of the day, the sharing of the experience. Just wonderful -- on to the next chapter! |
| Sunday 20th June 2004 22:49 | Fluffy Firsts: Tales of Harry and Ginny's First Kiss (Author Response) |
| :blush: Thanks bunches, Chele. |
