ibelieveintruelove
Wednesday 3rd September 2008 06:11 | Nightmares |
| Aww but tht was so sweet! We know Harry will eventually give in ;-) Nice story! |
DebbieO
Sunday 9th March 2008 20:38 | Nightmares |
| Great job. I loved this story! |
Patches
Wednesday 18th July 2007 03:08 | Nightmares |
| This is a bittersweet story. Ginny longing for Harry. Finding herself looking forward to Harry coming to the burrow. Finding herself in a strange forest but finding courage inside herself. Then finding herself in a strange muggle town. Then realizing where she was. Trying to entice Harry outside to her. Trying to give him his old quill back. Finally realizing that Voldemort tried to use her to portkey Harry to himself. Then their kiss that Ginny was not going to rememeber. That is sad. The saddest thing is Harry believing that for him to be in love would make him more vulnerable. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of your stories. p |
twinsmom
Friday 16th March 2007 20:58 | Nightmares |
| Wow |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 19th October 2006 15:58 | Nightmares |
| Ginny should be able to remember the kiss . |
Uzamaki-girl
Saturday 16th September 2006 21:03 | Nightmares |
| This was awesome. The pashion, the imagery everything was great!! I listened to "Must Be Dreaming" by Frou Frou while listening to this, which only added to this amazing story.^^ |
daniel_r_crazy22
Sunday 25th June 2006 09:19 | Nightmares |
| Wow. That was differant. And how was Ginny under the Imperus? Oh well. That was good non the less. Poor Harry. And poor Ginny. |
Roxy
Friday 21st April 2006 11:40 | Nightmares |
| Another great story! Geez, I love your writing style. So concise (I'm pretty sure that's the word I wanna use) and descriptive. Some stories can get so confusing when it's a situation like you've written about, but you did it wonderfully! I'm now a faithful reader of yours! |
levotatingT
Friday 13th May 2005 14:51 | Nightmares |
AWWWWW so cute. that was really good. Your awsome
Great job, keep writing, anf Plez write back
levotatingT |
Shadow Hider
Tuesday 22nd March 2005 20:58 | Nightmares |
wow.. this is really good |
tonks442
Saturday 19th March 2005 12:01 | Nightmares |
| How sad! Poor harry....It would be wonderful to find out what happens after this! I loved your story!
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bluejeanphoenix
Tuesday 30th November 2004 23:20 | Nightmares |
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obsidiana
Tuesday 28th September 2004 11:05 | Nightmares |
Oh, my....This was such a realisticly angsty dream fic....I loved that Harry told her in words and deeds how he felt about her...giving him the memory to charish...even knowing she wouldn't remember any of it.
Obsidiana |
Sib
Monday 13th September 2004 22:19 | Nightmares |
| What a great story. I'm trying to think of something specific to compliment you on, but the whole thing was great. Thanks! |
TigerLily8186
Monday 6th September 2004 15:25 | Nightmares |
| WOW. I've been shying away from reading much fanfiction lately, but this story is making me reconsider. Now this is like the stories I've gotten hooked to. The Angst fit perfectly, and the details flowed. Wow Now I'll have to go and check out your other works. |
DailyProphetReporting
Thursday 8th July 2004 04:59 | Nightmares |
You definitely sucked me in with the way you started this. Your lead is so very dream-like that I took Ginny for her word at first. That made the, well, nightmarish turn all the more compelling. Very well thought out.
But I think the best part of this is how you also turn the nightmare around with the Memory Charm. A Ginny-centric tale becomes Harry's deep, dark secret. I don't know that his actions -- the kisses -- are in character, but they fit perfectly in context. And it's hardly a stretch to picture Harry brooding about something only he'll ever know.
Very surreal, tragic and well written. Good job!
-KC |
PottyMalf_13
Friday 2nd July 2004 18:01 | Nightmares |
| This is an amazing piece... It was really good..... That is the best I can do to Explain it... great job. nicely done. |
PenelopeBlack
Friday 2nd July 2004 17:37 | Nightmares |
| Wow. This is an amazing piece of work. After reading it twice now, I'm still at a loss of words for what to say. I love this because it truly is original. Very sad though. Almost made me cry the first time. I think you had wonderful characterisations-especially on Harry at the end. Makes you wonder what other underage wizards and witches have been used by the dark side but have no clue. Excellent job. |
Pooca
Wednesday 30th June 2004 17:30 | Nightmares |
| Wow. This was...amazing. You threw me for a loop, with the Imperius...that was...mind bogglingly good. My favorite. My vote. Excellent. |
Mr. Intel
Tuesday 29th June 2004 13:16 | Nightmares |
Ooh. Your particular brand of angst just about gives you away!
This is one of the best, so far. I would be very surprised if you didn't win some kind of award. |
Lady Chi
Saturday 26th June 2004 22:23 | Nightmares |
ACK! I can't believe you stopped it there, of all the mother-lovin' places! The theme was angst, not reader-torture!!! LOL. Actually, I really enjoyed this. It's very unique in comparsion to the other stories.
I wish you the very best of luck with the contest!
Chi |
Cera
Friday 25th June 2004 09:04 | Nightmares |
| Brilliant one-shot! It was unique and so well written. Great job! |
Cygnus Crux
Friday 25th June 2004 09:03 | Nightmares |
Great flowing narrative throughout the story, and the kiis and Harry's feelings were described so well.
When I was done reading it It thought 'Wow' |
Gridley
Friday 25th June 2004 05:37 | Nightmares |
OK, that's more angst than I can take in a single sitting. That was powerful. That was frightening. That was really, really well done.
Harry's reaction to knowing that Ginny would be Oblivated...believable. All too believable. 'I know she won't remember this, but if she's not going to remember it, I still want to take the pain away...' |
p0tterfan
Friday 25th June 2004 00:11 | Nightmares |
| Great one shot ! |
Tosca
Thursday 24th June 2004 23:11 | Nightmares |
| Oh dear. I liked that so much. How brilliant! I hope you go on to win this. Your grasp of Ginny was perfect. I fully expect something like that to happen in canon. And the quill was a perfect touch! |
