gymnastgal19
Sunday 14th September 2008 18:48 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
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gymnastgal19
Saturday 13th October 2007 14:45 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| lol nice story i was wondering who they were gonna have harry look at... i thought that it would be ginny |
pyromain
Friday 24th August 2007 09:16 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| this was kind of a suprice I tought it would be Ginny he would run into not himself but it did make the story better. Loved it. |
Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 07:12 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Genius! I thought Ginny wanted to make Harry love and trust herself, and Harry was not supposed to see himself. And when he did see himself, I thought he would start loving himself like that Narcisse person, or whatever his name was, and I got panicky. But you made him not hate himself, which is genius!
Great little twist - making it seem like Ginny wanted to make Harry love herself, and it turning out to be that it was to make Harry not hate himself.
I just think you ruined the story slightly by making them tell Harry what they had done.
But otherwise, great story
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Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 07:12 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Genius! I thought Ginny wanted to make Harry love and trust herself, and Harry was not supposed to see himself. And when he did see himself, I thought he would start loving himself like that Narcisse person, or whatever his name was, and I got panicky. But you made him not hate himself, which is genius!
Great little twist - making it seem like Ginny wanted to make Harry love herself, and it turning out to be that it was to make Harry not hate himself.
I just think you ruined the story slightly by making them tell Harry what they had done.
But otherwise, great story
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Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 07:12 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Genius! I thought Ginny wanted to make Harry love and trust herself, and Harry was not supposed to see himself. And when he did see himself, I thought he would start loving himself like that Narcisse person, or whatever his name was, and I got panicky. But you made him not hate himself, which is genius!
Great little twist - making it seem like Ginny wanted to make Harry love herself, and it turning out to be that it was to make Harry not hate himself.
I just think you ruined the story slightly by making them tell Harry what they had done.
But otherwise, great story
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Aqua Fountain*
Sunday 15th April 2007 07:07 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Genius! I thought Ginny wanted to make Harry love and trust herself, and Harry was not supposed to see himself. And when he did see himself, I thought he would start loving himself like that Narcisse person, or whatever his name was, and I got panicky. But you made him not hate himself, which is genius!
Great little twist - making it seem like Ginny wanted to make Harry love herself, and it turning out to be that it was to make Harry not hate himself.
I just think you ruined the story slightly by making them tell Harry what they had done.
But otherwise, great story
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daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 5th June 2006 13:54 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| For a minute htere, I thought that Ginny was going to have Harry see her first. I like that he saw himself. It really helped. Good job! |
levotatingT
Saturday 16th April 2005 14:44 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
That was really great, short and sweet, and it didn't go as I was expecting it to go, I thought ginny was going to be the first person that Harry saw, very clever,
Luved it, can't wait to read more!
levotatingT |
bluejeanphoenix
Wednesday 1st December 2004 00:54 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| This is really interesting...I was so mad at them at first...like, how shallow could you be, to try adn fix Harry's problems with a love potion? But then the idea of having him see himself...it was actually quite touching that they'd want their friend to love himself...It's still kind of disturbing that they drugged him though. O.o Also, one thing wasn't clear for me - was he actually planning on killing himself? It was left sort of vague. Really interesting stuff. |
| Thursday 2nd December 2004 01:02 | Diseases Desperate Grown (Author Response) |
"Also, one thing wasn't clear for me - was he actually planning on killing himself? It was left sort of vague. Really interesting stuff."
Thanks for the review!
I intentionally left it vague, as it was mostly from Ginny, Ron and Hermione's POV. They were afraid that Harry was thinking of hurting himself because of his morbid interest in the rat poisons. But Harry wasn't seriously contemplating suicide. (Maybe some rat-icide, if he ever catches up to Wormtail.)
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saugart
Friday 23rd July 2004 22:10 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
A pleasant tale.
I thoroughly enjoyed re-reading it.
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Cera
Sunday 4th July 2004 13:13 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| Great idea with the mirror! I really liked this story... wonderful job! |
sunsethill
Friday 2nd July 2004 13:55 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
| Nice, unexpected twist at the end. |
Jeconais
Friday 2nd July 2004 07:11 | Diseases Desperate Grown |
Now that, was a cute entry. I really liked what they did with the love potion.
Tim |
