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Thursday 14th April 2005 12:02 | Beneath the Eye of the Storm | Nice little chapter there...I agree with Harry...getting caught like that was stupid.
Nice little sequence where the girls took down the Ferret. Stupid little rodent. I think a couple of kicks in the ribs were needed for good measure.
Now if we can just reunite the friends so that Harry can draw upon his 'stength' ole' Tom will be history. | Kinsfire
Tuesday 23rd November 2004 17:01 | Beneath the Eye of the Storm | | Okay, in this one the two girls prove that, no matter what, they are
not ready for a war, and will only get people killed. You walk
over to Malfoy, drive the point of his wand into his eye, and use it to
cast a Reducto. I look
forward to the chewing out they so richly deserve, assuming that they
are so infernally lucky as to survive. Draco is the enemy, and as
such, should die in this situation. You do NOT leave him alive
unless you know that you can IMMEDIATELY Portkey him out to be
interrogated.
| Cera
Friday 1st October 2004 00:17 | Beneath the Eye of the Storm | Wow... that was tense! I love how you switch perspectives from time to time, giving us a difference glimpse of the battle.
Ginny's thoughts about Harry, and wanting to see him again were wonderful and heartbreaking. She'll see him... at least she'd better.
*scoots over to read the next chapter* | Katieay
Monday 19th July 2004 07:14 | Beneath the Eye of the Storm | Oooh, rather creepy chapter you've written here Tari! I like Hermione being the one to go and get Ginny and that ball thingamy was very cool... I hope it doesn't have any long term affect on everyone's favourite know-it-all.
I hope everyone gets through this ok and I can't wait to read more!
Are you nearly done with this story? It feels like it's coming to a close? | XiaoXiao
Thursday 15th July 2004 02:14 | Beneath the Eye of the Storm | I love this story! You have a flair for writing action. Plus I just love post Hogwarts stories! I hope that the person behind the wall is not who I think it is...
Update soon, please! |
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