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hermione&ginny
Monday 11th July 2011 08:00 | The Gryffindor Four | | This chapter made me .... So much my little sister came up and stared at me.... | daniel_r_crazy22
Thursday 29th June 2006 18:28 | The Gryffindor Four | | Haha. Of course they show up right then and there. Brilliant. | ridgeback77
Tuesday 27th September 2005 18:18 | The Gryffindor Four | | Excellent. Now that you have them all paired off, I wonder what will happen next.
| Green Meanie
Sunday 29th August 2004 09:04 | The Gryffindor Four | Lol. Tell us about what? I like this fanfic but some parts are a little repeated like ron will go bonkers if hermione and ginny dont stop giggling and then you use bonkers like 5 times in this chapter. I'm not trying to be mean I'm just saying vary the words a little. Other than that I'm very happy with the fact that this fanfic has hardly any cliches and the ones there are just minimal, the very rare on that you hardly find in a good fanfic but if you pay real close attention you can notice them.
~!@#$%^&*()_+GREEN MEANIE+_)(*&^%$#@!~
P.S. For your control over your writing, very good. |
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