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Katieay Saturday 7th May 2005 11:01 | Fathoming the Mind of a Werewolf | Bugger, I wasn't done
Wry and sincere, I love how you're building up their friendships so obviously and so quickly. Also, your descriptions are awesome.
Enough gushing, up to Chapter 3!
KTA | Katieay Saturday 7th May 2005 11:00 | Fathoming the Mind of a Werewolf | Oooh, this just keeps getting better! That howler freaked me out, completely. I love how you have it being so directly opposite to Mrs Weasleys' howlers.
The fact that you've already got Lily and James disliking each other is also so very clever.
Besides, he had spent the day sitting with Lily Evans and Alice Walker, so there had to be something at least partially wrong with him. They were girls, for Merlin’s sake.
This completely cracked me up. It's very, very true of an 11-year-old boy I just love it. I hope, though, that you make Snape do something foul and loathsome soon, as I've felt sorry for him in both chapters so far -- though I felt sorry for 15-year-old Snape in OotP, too.
And the ending of this chapter is funny! Wry and | Cera Monday 1st November 2004 23:47 | Fathoming the Mind of a Werewolf | Another great chapter. I like Sirius' suspicions about Remus, it's a nice way to build up to them finding out about him.
I was surpised that Longbottom was a great flyer, but I like it.
Lily reminds me of Hermione, and I like that you've got her and James at odds already.
Well written. | Pineapple Queen Monday 23rd August 2004 22:28 | Fathoming the Mind of a Werewolf | I love this story! It's always good to find a well-written MWPP fic, as they're my favorite era. I hope you continue, this promises to be great! Only one formatting suggestion--maybe you should mark scene switches by *** or ~*~ , as it makes things a little less confusing
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