WhiteWitch
Sunday 8th January 2006 23:07 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One |
I LOOOOOVED it!
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TigerLily8186
Wednesday 8th December 2004 23:38 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One |
Oohh you quoted D.H. Lawrence... I've read a book by him, and I just got some more from the library. May I ask where this one is from?
Ohh L/J friction. That is always interesting. And yes, even though I am late starting this story, I am going to review each chapter. |
Pineapple Queen
Saturday 25th September 2004 08:59 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One |
Sorry for the double review, but I just went onto your author page and noticed--you're the same Bella who wrote "The Story of Lily"? I read that story about two years ago and LOVED it! Now I'm looking forward to this story even more, and adding you to my email update list!
-Pineapple Queen, who is very, VERY happy. |
| Saturday 25th September 2004 08:59 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One (Author Response) |
| I did indeed write "The Story of Lily"! I'm so glad you liked it, and I hope this one will be MILES better (I can't read SoL without wanting to barf because the grammar, spelling, etc. are TERRIBLE) and I'm glad you like it so far! |
Pineapple Queen
Saturday 25th September 2004 08:56 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One |
| Love it! This looks like it's going to be a great Lily/James story, which are few and far between. The quote at the beginning was wonderful. =) |
Bring and Fly
Saturday 25th September 2004 06:24 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One |
| Quote:"I'm going to kill him." "Who, James? I don't think that's-"
"No, Dumbledore."
A brilliant start to what promises us a rollercoaster ride. I don't think it matters that we know the outcome- James Lily = --I think the interest is in how you get us there.
Hoping for more soon. |
XiaoXiao
Saturday 25th September 2004 01:26 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One |
| Such fun! I like your explanation for their mutual dislike. Very cute start. |
DailyProphetReporting
Friday 24th September 2004 00:51 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One |
But is the title supposed to be natural "curse" or "curve"(like the quote)?
That's the fault of her silly beta (who would be, of course, me ). I've fixed it to the proper curve. Sorry Bella.
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abalee
Thursday 23rd September 2004 21:22 | Following the Natural Curve: Part One |
| Very nice! More soon - I like it. But is the title supposed to be natural "curse" or "curve"(like the quote)? Will you update soon? Please! I really am enjoying James/Lily, so it's a nice change! |
