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platypus621
Friday 31st December 2004 08:40 | What Grown Ups Believe | | is this a one-shot or are you going to update with a story because it is really good and i know i would love to see it contued in a novle length story | | Wednesday 5th January 2005 09:37 | What Grown Ups Believe (Author Response) |
is this a one-shot or are you going to update with a story
because it is really good and i know i would love to see it contued in
a novle length story I had planned on just doing a one-shot for this. But I've recently thought about a sequel to it.
I'm still toying with the idea, though.
I'm glad you liked it though ^_^
| platypus621
Saturday 25th December 2004 19:07 | What Grown Ups Believe | | this is very cute, are you going to update? please do | lizzyrose89
Tuesday 12th October 2004 17:26 | What Grown Ups Believe | | Oh I wish this could be true! It would explain so much of Petunia's personality! But Jo has, unfortunately confirmed P is a Muggle. *sigh*. Although, as she rejected her chance to become a trained witch, could that class her as a Muggle? Such a sad thought, if 'twere canon ... | Cera
Thursday 7th October 2004 19:46 | What Grown Ups Believe | This was a interesting story. I think it's certainly plausable that Petunia was a Witch, but I've not seen anyone write it.
The flow of words in this story were great. It sounded just like an eleven year old (well.. a mature one). You didn't make the sentences too complicated, because it wouldn't have suited the tone (if that makes any sense).
This was my favourite line:
"Standing on a pile of laundry -the white laundry! - was a small tan owl."
Such a Petunia-like plot.
Thanks!
Sarah | blinieldar
Tuesday 5th October 2004 23:03 | What Grown Ups Believe | | Interesting take on things. ive seen other stories that gave jealousy as a possible reason for Petunia's attitude. However; I think this is the first time someone has raised the spectre of a lost opportunity for the reason. Well done! |
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