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AllIsFairInLoveAndWar
Tuesday 12th October 2010 23:16 | Eternity Lost | | HEY, What happened to Harry | AllIsFairInLoveAndWar
Tuesday 12th October 2010 23:16 | Eternity Lost | | HEY, What happened to Harry | gymnastgal19
Saturday 22nd March 2008 23:30 | Eternity Lost | omg.... i wonder if he took percys body to confuse them... or to torture him... or to use it as experiments or to somehow trick the weasleys/harry during a battle or something....
| GryffindorDragon
Thursday 27th July 2006 13:53 | Eternity Lost | Harry's mind was in Wormtail's body; it is not plausible that a mark on Wormtail's body would be applied to Harry's body; sorry, but it doesn't work and why is Voldie still able to get into Harry's mind (with his power occlumency should be ample; let alone the wards Dumbledore did at the end of the last book.
Good for Moody , though I'm not sure Harry, given his upbringing and all he's been through is really up to the task.
| Ash
Friday 8th April 2005 22:26 | Eternity Lost | Great chapter! Your characters are all so well-drawn and individual, and their thought processes natural. Such a difficult thing, such a little thing, but it makes all the difference in the world.
Poor Weasleys. | critmo
Monday 14th February 2005 09:55 | Eternity Lost | | That's what I meant. Harry and Ginny kissed on the train which implies that they would be somewhat ... closer (?) than before. And here's Harry not even bothering to try and comfort her! I don't get that! | parakletos
Monday 11th October 2004 11:09 | Eternity Lost | | This is one of those stories that frustrate the reader. Why because we
can't wait to get into the next chapter! All the best with your writing
and I look forward to he rest.
| Bring and Fly
Saturday 9th October 2004 09:18 | Eternity Lost | A storm was raging; the wind blew the world into submission as clouds covered the moon. Wonderfully descriptive line! Brought a shiver down my spine.
I am pretty sure I've read later chapters of this somewhere else... I have to say I read the first chapter and forgot to review. Apologies! Much as I disliked Percy in OotP, you made me feel more compassionate towards him and I felt the portrayal of numb shock from the other Weasleys was accurate. There are so many things you've mentioned in passing that I have more questions than answers. I like answers, so...
Shall be watching for part three of this, Myth!
Cheers, Cara. BaF |
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