Hmmm. something's fishy about Cho; why didn't he I.D. her? Well, I guess I'll just have to keep reading and find out! Love the story so far!

Delani

Yay! I spent yesterday and a few hours today to read Harry Potter and the Grand Alliance and Harry Potter and the Bond, and now the first chapter in this story, and I must say that I´m impressed! You manage to keep every chapter interesting without writing so long chapters! I´m jealous!

Anyway, keep up the good work and update soon!

(And if this message make no sence what so ever its because English isn't my first language...)

It made sense - to me, at least. Of course, some people think I'm insane, and most of them are right...

Did that make any sense?

Yay Gridley!  A great start to a new story.  I'm wondering though, as your beta...will I be seeing more soon?!?

Hugs -- you've done good. (*laughs*)

Susan

Oh, my.  I don't dislike Cho anymore. Fantastic start Gridley, I loved Harry's reaction to Cho just rocking up at his house, and his tactlessness is perfectly in character. And thank goodness, 's back

I'm a bit confused as to how Harry got to Hogwarts without getting in trouble, and where everyone else is (I can't imagine the Weasley's not having at least one person sitting with her at all times)

Can't wait for more!

Katie

I knew I'd regret deleting that scene...

Harry's guards (Company of Tebo folks) Portkeyed Harry to their HQ, then to Hogwarts entrance. There was a Weasley in attendance, but Harry asked them to step outside for a moment.

More is coming... slowly, I'm afraid.

Two words:

Thank you. :-)

Very fairy tale! And I mean that in a nice way, being a sucker for fluff. Great to see that Harry still doesn't wait to hear the full explanation being going off at half-cock! What else was Cho going to tell him, I wonder?

Guess I'll have to wait for the next installment! Who-hoo! More good reading to come! Excellent.

 

Bleck, Cho    I just don't like her.  She doesn't seem to be up to any mischief, but I still won't mind if she gets blow up.

I am with you sista'!

The ending gave me nightmares...But the begining wasn't as horrible as I was expecting...I would still like to see her get hit with a hair loss and acne hex...snort

She seemed so ...well...normal...I have to say I kept waiting for harry to whip off her mask while she snarled...'It would have worked too if it weren't for that pesk boy and his owl.'

I've said it once...no..twice...was it three times? Aw, heck who cares? You are the cherry on my double fudge sundae. The happy in my meal. Thanks! You made an excellent addition to the series.

Glad Cho didn't pull some crazy sappy...let me hold your hand while we both cry things.

Obsidiana

WooHoo!  

Love the Sleeping Beauty moment.  Very cool.  And good on Harry for picking up on it so quick.

I'm not really anti-Cho.  So I don't have any problem with that whole thing, and I'm really curious to see where you take it.

And hooray for new storyness.

Sleeping Beauty - ahh, I love it.  Much better begininning than the horror of your ending, lol!  Way to go, Harry!

Bleck, Cho    I just don't like her.  She doesn't seem to be up to any mischief, but I still won't mind if she gets blow up.