harry_ginnyfan Saturday 8th March 2008 08:38 | The Lighthouse |
I really like this story. Harry actually being older than 17 to come against Voldemort. Now you need to add another chapter. So we can see who the painting is of. Is it of Riddle? Come on another chapter pleeeaassee!!!
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pyromain Tuesday 5th June 2007 15:14 | The Lighthouse |
before this one i finished waiting at which I left a review that it left me hanging wel I know understand it was because it was an introduction to this story and a bloody good one at that. I real like this story and hope that the rewrite of it will be coming soon because it is really good and the theme of harry and ginny coming to gether partly because of an orphanage for magic children is a theme which I and I think al readers love.
Seen that the las update on this orignal story is 3 years ago, I hope that you haven't abandoned this story, please continue this lovely story. |
sarasmomma Wednesday 27th December 2006 00:35 | The Lighthouse |
Who is in the picture? Sirius? Lily and James? The suspense is killing me! |
Grandma Kate Wednesday 16th August 2006 16:53 | The Lighthouse |
Starrika,
I look at this story every once in a while and hope you have time and the inclination to flesh it out. |
Grandma Kate Tuesday 11th July 2006 10:30 | The Lighthouse |
Oh dear, I wish you would add to The Lighthouse.
I like Harry and Ginny and the first of the twelve children. |
Stormdelver Thursday 1st September 2005 10:22 | The Lighthouse |
Oh come on- your still leaving us i hang- you know a pox on the HBP- I like this take much better- I will wait and hope you continue- it is a very good story and you really ought to continue it and ignore the change in canon. Well I could badger you for hours but I will just leave you in hopes you continue- if you ever want another Beta reader- keep me in mind, I would be delighted. |
jeanne Friday 17th June 2005 14:53 | The Lighthouse |
How ,with all these fantastic reviews,can you leave it all up in the air? I do hope and pray you haven,t become ill and are hurting about something or other. I hadn,t thought of the possibility of ill health.Take care,Jeanne. |
Saturday 18th June 2005 19:51 | The Lighthouse (Author Response) |
Thanks for your concern :) I won't leave it in the air, I promise. |
jeanne Friday 17th June 2005 14:47 | The Lighthouse |
Nov,2004. I asked a question of another writer. Does PS. expect writers to complete their work, and do they check and see if they do? Guess I got my answer. You have deserted your fic, and it,s a shame. Could you not challenge another writer to adopt it and following your original story line, complete it. It has the potential to be a fabulous fic. Please try. |
Saturday 18th June 2005 19:51 | The Lighthouse (Author Response) |
Nov,2004. I asked a question of another writer. Does PS. expect writers to complete their work, and do they check and see if they do? Guess I got my answer. You have deserted your fic, and it,s a shame. Could you not challenge another writer to adopt it and following your original story line, complete it. It has the potential to be a fabulous fic. Please try. I haven't abandoned it. Unfortunately, I've had some RL issues that have taken over, as real life issues tend to do. I'm planning on rewriting the chapters to fit HBP canon in, and then continuing with the fic. :)
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Anne Monday 27th December 2004 15:38 | The Lighthouse |
Update!!!!! please!!!! I really love it this far... |
Neely61 Thursday 25th November 2004 20:33 | The Lighthouse |
Just found your story and am loving it so far. I hope the rest is just as good. I like the idea and don't think I've seen another story with anything like it. The only one I know of that was even close was about Harry adopting Dudly's daughter once it was discovered she was magical and Dudly wanted nothing more to do with her. Can't remember the title or who wrote it, but I liked the premise. Looking forward to more! |
Monday 29th November 2004 13:30 | The Lighthouse (Author Response) |
The story you're talking about it is Caitlyn's "Lessons for Life", though I'm not sure if it's here on PS.net. It's a wonderful story, and her Parenting!Harry has partly inspired mine. |
Aberforth's Avatar Sunday 21st November 2004 06:46 | The Lighthouse |
I just found this story, but I'm enjoying it very much. I think Miranda is very well done. She's full of conflicting emotions, but not over the top. Harry seems well suited to his new role as "older brother." I especially enjoy your treatment of Harry and Ginny dancing around each other. I'll be on the lookout for new chapters. |
roxypoxy Sunday 21st November 2004 02:12 | The Lighthouse |
that was a gorgeous storty, I was really dissapointed that you haven't made another chapter, though it's obvious, it's probably Sirius. |
ninkenate Saturday 20th November 2004 08:14 | The Lighthouse |
Oh, it could be Sirius or even a bad portrait since this was a Black
house. Could be Bella or even Narcissa. Since the Black's were
Voldermort's followers maybe it is a portrait of him before his
incident with Harry as a baby. I can't wait to find out.
I do wish Harry and Ginny would just open their eyes and see what's between them and admit it.
This suspense is a killer. Good job. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
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kensai Friday 19th November 2004 04:43 | The Lighthouse |
I enjoy your work, but I tdo not enjoy waiting on these cliffhangers for months. |
oliverwood Thursday 18th November 2004 02:42 | The Lighthouse |
so long out in the cold..good bridging chapter..more please. |
Tamar73 Thursday 18th November 2004 01:19 | The Lighthouse |
I thoroughly enjoyed the first four chapters! Taking in an orphan sounds very much like something Harry would do, and your cliffhanger has at least 2 potentially fascinating directions for development. I look forward to seeing the portrait, and watching Harry learn the joys of parenting. |
Arnel Wednesday 17th November 2004 10:36 | The Lighthouse |
I'm so glad you're continuing this story. It's definitely worth the wait between chapters. I love Miranda's character and how she's so much like Hermione. Everyone needs a Hermione in their lives and between Miranda and Ginny, Harry has two women who will keep him grounded...no matter what their ages.
I really like the attic scene and the fact that Ginny is flirting with Harry while she's helping him. I hope we see more of Edward Black in the future. He seems helpful and knowledgeable, though quite verbose.
I look forward to to the next chapter. |
XiaoXiao Wednesday 17th November 2004 04:12 | The Lighthouse |
Oooh...a cliffhanger! Is the painting Sirius? I bet it is. I love the tension between and . And Miranda is adorable! |
p0tterfan Tuesday 16th November 2004 23:52 | The Lighthouse |
Hmm ... Sirius' portrait I imagine?
Good story ... you gotta update faster though ... please :)
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Iris Tuesday 16th November 2004 22:20 | The Lighthouse |
ohhhhh, evil cliff-hanger...
is it sirius, i wonder
anyway, love the story so far, update soon |
prometheanalchemist Tuesday 16th November 2004 20:52 | The Lighthouse |
AAaaggghhhhhhhhhhhh.............Cliffhanger!!
Write faster!
Much faster!!
Pretty please!!
Just what I needed to ease my stressful day, a bit of straighforward (but very well written) fluff.
Looking forward to the next part!
RG |
Antonia East Tuesday 16th November 2004 19:59 | The Lighthouse |
Bah, evil cliffie - though I take it that's Sirius's portrait.
Interesting story, I really enjoyed the chapters so far. |
Stormdelver Tuesday 16th November 2004 18:54 | The Lighthouse |
Oooh, good way to finish a chapter- ok a bit of thought, how about getting Harry and Ginny through all this, getting them to admit to each other they really have never loved anyone else and get on with it- lest see their relationship grow and their orphanage take roots- of course theow in the dark tosser and assorted gits for a laugh and a bit o ron and hermi too for good measure-- great so far keep it up |
Kundun Tuesday 16th November 2004 18:46 | The Lighthouse |
oh. my. god. i hate cliffhangers! if you don't update soon, [insert really really really threatening threat here]. other than that, yay! parenting!harrry and ginny goodness! update soon! |
Waywren Truesong Tuesday 16th November 2004 12:48 | The Lighthouse |
EEE! More Lighthouse yay!
....about sums up my reaction to seeing your story listing in the
chapter updates email. ^^ It's always good to see more of
this.... ..oh, dear. That's a portrait of Sirius,
isn't it? I'd say his parents, but I can't see quite so much guilt
there....
(and the baby portrait must be so cute...)
Thanks ever so for updating!
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saugart Tuesday 16th November 2004 11:06 | The Lighthouse |
Ooh, a cliffhanger!
You have a decent sense of plot development, and you're moving the story along nicely.
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