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Bring and Fly
Monday 8th November 2004 05:08 | Gadding With Goats | I especially liked the way you brought in things from the film portrayal of Snape to create a family resemblance for his ancestor! It made me burst out laughing! And a Snape as headmaster! (presumably before Dippet) Excellent!
I also liked the way you introduced Fawkes and casually dropped the two wand cores, almost in passing. As Albus says many years later, "even our smallest actions can have consequences we do not at the time forsee". I confess to a little shudder there.
Chased by goats... I can see Minerva's face now...! Although I would have expected Albus to have been a bit quicker on the uptake, since he is supposed to be bright. Makes him more human though! | Shadow Hider
Sunday 7th November 2004 20:33 | Gadding With Goats | | ^_^ | Robert Owen
Sunday 7th November 2004 19:14 | Gadding With Goats | | Oops! Everybody find cover! Albus is in big trouble! | XiaoXiao
Sunday 7th November 2004 06:18 | Gadding With Goats | Absolutely hilarious! I especially loved the bit with Fawkes and his tailfeathers--nice way to explain the wands. Poor Albus! | | Sunday 7th November 2004 14:09 | Gadding With Goats (Author Response) |
Absolutely hilarious! I especially loved the bit with Fawkes and his tailfeathers--nice way to explain the wands. Poor Albus!
Thanks, glad you like the feather thingie, that's one of my fav ideas in this fic :D |
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