gymnastgal19
Thursday 17th July 2008 21:46 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
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gymnastgal19
Tuesday 5th February 2008 06:53 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
that sucks so much! first harry has those dreams and then finds out he and dudley get to spend the weekend together... sounds fun! NOT
nice chapter cant wait to read the rest
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Narumi
Friday 8th June 2007 10:21 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Hm sounds like a good foundation for an interesting story! |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 13th December 2006 11:06 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
Why did Hermione only charm the shoes?
Would Dudley be so likely to torment Harry as in the past after the episode with the Dementors?
I decided I needed to read this before I tried 'Shadow of the Serpent'
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| Wednesday 13th December 2006 16:55 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising (Author Response) |
| Hermione did that as a quick fix. That was used as an example of Harry's treatment by the Dursleys, to show rather than tell. As for Dudley... he might not have been so quick to bully Harry, but I wanted to play with this relationship and, as this was my first fic ever, please understand that it's not going to be perfect. My idea at the time was to write a small, funny story about Harry and Dudley being left home alone and the trouble Dudley gets Harry into. It morphed into something very different. I rewrote the original for PS when I was halfway through Shadow because I wasn't pleased with it. Hopefully the rewrite is better (I think so) but certain elements had to be kept in place for consistency with the sequel. Also, try to remember that this was written a long time ago before HBP, and canon has changed. That being said, I think it's important to read this before Shadow, otherwise the sequel wouldn't make much sense. Thanks for all the reviews... I'll try to answer any questions as they come up. |
Believer
Sunday 20th August 2006 01:45 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
Uh oh! I smell trouble .
Very interesting story plot so far.
Is Dudley going to have a party? Will someone get arested? Guess I'll just have to read on to find out. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Saturday 10th June 2006 20:36 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Oh, it is so funny how they think Dudley is so perfect. I wanna go see this "little get together." |
Ladybug
Tuesday 31st January 2006 23:56 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| I remember reading the first version of this quite some time ago at some other site (a long time ago, in a galaxy far away...) - I'm much looking forward to enjoying the new improved edition. The Dursleys in this chapter were very good, I could hear them perfectly through your spot-on dialogue. Good work! and now... On with the show! |
VanishingShmink
Wednesday 20th April 2005 16:04 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| I swore off reading fanfiction for a while, but this one really peaked my interest. So far I've really enjoyed it! The twins rock! My favorite part would have to be Harry giving Ginny a tour of the house... there's just something so intimate about that. |
Muggle Witch
Monday 18th April 2005 14:59 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Those Dursley's! I just want to . I read the original of this and I look forward to reading teh 'remake' Well done. |
DADAGinny
Thursday 18th November 2004 13:36 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
Yay! I loved this fic! I am so glad you posted it here!
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| Friday 19th November 2004 08:29 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising (Author Response) |
Yay! I loved this fic! I am so glad you posted it here!
Me too! I was reluctant to post on too many different sites, but since this is finished already, it shouldn't be too much of a struggle. I've wanted to edit this for a long time. Even though I was pleased with the ending, I was less than pleased with the beginning. I am excited to write some new scenes and to make this story what it should have been from the beginning. That's why I'm taking my time with Shadows. I won't make the same mistake again by rushing to publish! |
Arnel
Wednesday 17th November 2004 23:51 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
I'm really glad you decided to post Home Alone here at Phoenix Song. It's one of my favorites and your revisions have made the characters more believable and closer to canon. I look forward to following this story to its conclusion.
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| Friday 19th November 2004 08:32 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising (Author Response) |
I'm really glad you decided to post Home Alone here at Phoenix Song. It's one of my favorites and your revisions have made the characters more believable and closer to canon. I look forward to following this story to its conclusion.
With your help, I hope I can finally look at this story and be completely satisfied that it is the best I could make it! Thanks a bunch!!!!!
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