gymnastgal19
Thursday 17th July 2008 21:59 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| cant wait to read this again |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 5th February 2008 07:00 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
thats an interesting deal... i wonder what that party is.... drugs?? or worse?
nice forshadowing on the deal with the devil part
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Narumi
Friday 8th June 2007 10:22 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Dun dun duunn! I wonder who's gonna break the deal first? lol |
GryffindorDragon
Wednesday 13th December 2006 11:55 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
Well, Harry's not a pushover here, is he?
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Believer
Sunday 20th August 2006 02:00 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Deal with the Devil indeed! |
lorgbb
Wednesday 14th June 2006 23:52 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| this is moving along interestingly... just wanted to say great work, u really birng out the characters personalities |
daniel_r_crazy22
Saturday 10th June 2006 20:51 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Lets see how this turns out! |
Ladybug
Wednesday 1st February 2006 00:09 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| He had just read number thirty-seven, alphabetise the spice rack, when the house shook. That's a great sentence - sums up Petunia and Dudley perfectly! I enjoyed the conversations with Tonks and with Dudley - they're very natural. |
| Thursday 2nd February 2006 18:52 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising (Author Response) |
| Poor Harry. I actually miss him being bossed around by his relatives in canon, so I decided to write it in. I think they'd do it this way, being the chickens that they are... leave him a list and then go away and expect that he does it while they're gone. Thanks for commenting! |
Rocky235
Wednesday 14th December 2005 15:43 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
I'm enjoying your story.
I shudder to thinkof what Big D and his pose want to do. I'm sure you'll have Harry hold his own. |
Muggle Witch
Monday 18th April 2005 15:11 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| deal with the devil is right. Good job! |
Gridley
Saturday 20th November 2004 12:34 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
| Yeah, I know that 'pact with the devil' sensation, though it is possible to come out ahead on such things. |
| Saturday 20th November 2004 13:38 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising (Author Response) |
Yeah, I know that 'pact with the devil' sensation, though it is possible to come out ahead on such things. Plus this is Harry we're talking about here. Take that into account, as well....
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Iris
Thursday 18th November 2004 16:44 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
hmmm...deal with the devil, isn't that a bit extreme??? or major forshadowing
love the story so far, although can't wait for ron, hermione, and ginny.
~Iris |
| Thursday 18th November 2004 20:23 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising (Author Response) |
hmmm...deal with the devil, isn't that a bit extreme??? or major forshadowing
love the story so far, although can't wait for ron, hermione, and ginny.
~Iris
Dudley is certainly no angel, no matter what his mum thinks! Lol!
Thanks for taking the time to review. The guys are up next, and then the girls. Look for regular updates because this has been done for awhile. But I wouldn't go off to read it elsewhere. I'm changing quite a bit (I've learned a lot since this first came out) and I'm also adding things to fit with the sequel, Shadow of the Serpent. This is only the beginning. If you're looking for a light, fluffy fic... well, you might want to look elsewhere. (But I hope you don't!)
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Nigel_Black
Thursday 18th November 2004 12:05 | Home Alone: Shadow Rising |
interesting... though i think harry won't let dudley off in a year to come...
"Harry, despite his curiosity about what the night would bring, had a sinking feeling he may have just made a deal with the devil."
it's not that bad, is it? |
