prongz82
Sunday 19th April 2009 20:34 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| Three word to describe this incredible story. ABLSOLUTELY BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!!!! I actually felt i was Harry. I was actually sweating from reading this. |
gymnastgal19
Wednesday 3rd September 2008 22:22 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
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Sheepie_101
Friday 13th June 2008 21:59 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| + + LOVE!!!!!!!! |
angeli
Sunday 30th March 2008 13:30 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| l liked this story, the bit where ron and hermione were teasing harry was very cute and well written. there is room for improvement in your romantic "soppy" bits though. |
chiantiqueen
Thursday 10th January 2008 02:58 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| Aww, I love it when you can read a story from another persons point of view. It's great to get the whole story from all involved. Another well written story and again a pleasure to read. KEpp up the good work! |
gymnastgal19
Tuesday 2nd October 2007 22:08 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
Nice to see it from harry's pov! well done!
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pyromain
Sunday 9th September 2007 06:03 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| really like the idea of the pendant it would be a good tool to get things clear. |
weasleysrcool
Monday 3rd January 2005 13:39 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| I loved both versions of this story. I'm such a sucker for H/G fluff. Great story, I'm so glad you told it. |
arios
Monday 29th November 2004 22:34 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| loved it! |
Stormdelver
Friday 26th November 2004 20:46 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
I swar that I have felt just like Harry- ok so has almost any guy- strange how you can take on anything without the bat of an eye but just admitting what you feel to that someone is the hardest (and most importaint) thing you do- and if your rejected- wow- crash and burn- its beyond devestating.
Good job- nice story and awwwwwwwww |
Pugpal
Thursday 25th November 2004 00:33 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| Cute! I luv it! |
p0tterfan
Wednesday 24th November 2004 23:03 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| Very sweet ... well written.
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mary-v
Wednesday 24th November 2004 18:06 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
Brilliant! It had all the elements I love to find in a fic! LOVED it!
~Maria~ |
ice princess
Wednesday 24th November 2004 15:31 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
Wow, great story! I always love reading these one-shot get-together stories. Keep up the great work!
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Aggiebell
Wednesday 24th November 2004 13:15 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
Oh, yay! That was lovely fluff--just what I needed on a cold,
dreary day! I enjoyed reading this from Harry's POV. I
think you did a great job capturing his insecurity, and this was a
great compliment to Ginny's POV. I did something similar with one
of my fics--I originally wrote it in Ginny's POV, and then Harry
pestered me until I told his side of the story (and expanded it a bit),
and it was great fun to write.
I also loved Ron and Hermione teasing Harry. That was too fun!
Julie
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Iris
Wednesday 24th November 2004 10:46 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
awww... cute fluff
that was great, i do hope you keep writing more
~Iris |
Robert Owen
Wednesday 24th November 2004 05:17 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
| Nice take from Harry's POV. we want more! |
Eressea
Wednesday 24th November 2004 02:40 | A Valentine Surprise, Revisited |
Great story!
Trinkle. Such a JKR kinda name. Like Dedalus Diggle. Hee hee.
I found the scene where Harry buys the gift a bit hard to believe. Can't Harry get in trouble if someone spots him in Hogsmeade, much less Gringotts? Would someone really sell such a valuable gift to a lovesick teenager? Even thought he does respect Harry, adults have a tendency to underestimate a teenager's feelings. Perhaps this one does understand. I suppose he must, considering that he is getting no profit. This is part of the reason why I'm surprised Harry never questioned the price or the age. I'd think I was being cheated. Also, the goblins probably wouldn't have a master key, or at least I don't think so. Maybe if it can only be operated by a goblin. It seems too easy to steal. But then again, Harry does need to speak to the manager.
The whole concept of the pendant is pretty cool.
"He imagined himself standing in front of her, boldly proclaiming his love. "I love you, Ginny Weasley!" He cringed." Love this line. You can just see it.
I like your characterization of Hermione. Did I spell that right? Anyway, I love how you gave her a sense of humor as opposed to making her some sort of homework machine who only takes a break to moan over Ron. Though this is how JKR sometimes makes her. I prefer the change. She can't spend all her time doing homework. And you do still show that she gets after her friends and everything. That scene with Ron and Hermione being sarcastic with Harry is great. It may go on for a bit too long, but that's probably just me. It seems that too many years with Fred and George are taking their toll! It makes you want to smack Ron.
The last lines are so cute!
Excellent job overall! |
