Wooster
Sunday 9th July 2006 19:28 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
| Again: Excellent. The web you've created out of these agents and double agents makes for very interesting reading. |
| Tuesday 18th July 2006 06:35 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
| And don't forget the triple choclate fudge agents... oops, wrong universe. |
huskers
Wednesday 15th June 2005 14:34 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
| Which side is Snape on? You do a good job of casting us in doubt. |
| Monday 20th June 2005 06:12 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
| And I hope I can keep you in doubt until all is revealed. :-) |
blinieldar
Friday 3rd December 2004 07:15 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
| Excellent chapter as always. However I will have to stop reading
your stories first thing in the morning-my head hurts. Keep up the
wonderful job
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| Friday 3rd December 2004 09:05 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
| I tend to read fanfic in the early AM myself - which has made me sprint to work more than once. :-} |
Delani
Friday 3rd December 2004 00:39 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
Lovely; keep 'em coming. I'm sorry I've not got some stunnig remarks to make, but no doubt, this is quite an enticing story...
Michelle |
| Friday 3rd December 2004 09:05 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
| A review is quite adequate, though insightful remarks and constructive criticism always earn bonus points. |
millercommamatt
Friday 3rd December 2004 00:38 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
| I like the style of this chapter. Flesh things out more. Your chapters are fairly short and have the potential to be filled with so much more detail and life. |
| Friday 3rd December 2004 09:04 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
Sigh. Sadly, this is one of the problems of letting engineers write things. Fleshing things out is about the thing I am worst at. Heck, I'm better at comma placement than writing pure description!
At this point, I'm under some self-pressure to finish this story before HBP comes out and this all becomes AU. I've had the final battle I'm building up to scripted since a week after OotP came out, and I want to tell that story!
I somehow doubt I'll be able to kick the fanfic habit, and there are already plot bunnies circling. Hopefully I'll be able to take some more time with those. Thanks for the review! |
XiaoXiao
Friday 3rd December 2004 00:38 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
Wow. I've read Mean!Dean before, but never Evil!Dean. I never thought of him as a Deather, but I suppose you never know...
Pansy surprises me less.
I hope that they figure this out before any important damage is done! |
| Friday 3rd December 2004 08:58 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
The who are the spies/who are they working for/who's got the map plotlines will run through most of this story, but I promise I will reveal everything at the end. :-) |
Robert Owen
Thursday 2nd December 2004 21:40 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
Somebody is really playing with fire here. I like the twists within twists.
Robert
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| Friday 3rd December 2004 08:55 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
| Its so fun to play with fire! So warm, and... OUCH! |
Kelleypen
Thursday 2nd December 2004 21:17 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
| Why doesn't Harry just use the summoning charm to retrieve the map? (from Pansy) Well done again. I hope there is more soon. |
| Friday 3rd December 2004 08:55 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
| You can place magical protections on things to prevent them growing legs (or wings) and walking off. The current holder of the Map considers it to be a very important item and has taken a number of precautions to ensure that they remain the current holder. |
Iris
Thursday 2nd December 2004 20:29 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom |
ooohhh, another cliffhanger
Love the story, plenty of twists to keep anyone guessing...
update soon |
| Friday 3rd December 2004 08:53 | Harry Potter and the Price of Freedom (Author Response) |
| Well, actually, compared to the cliffie I was thinking of ending on, that's nothing. You'll see it halfway through the next chapter. |
