QuidditchLover Sunday 11th November 2007 19:50 | Unspoken Feelings |
aww this is so sweet. i liked the poem. a lot.emilygail0323@aol.com |
Cera Monday 13th December 2004 16:30 | Unspoken Feelings |
Shina--
I'm quite delayed in my review here, sorry about that. I just wanted to reitterate that I really like this story. My favourite part by far is your Hermione. You write her very, very well, her dialogue and her actions.
And the poem is so lovely.
Keep up the great work! |
Monday 13th December 2004 23:38 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thank you so much for your review, Sarah! Your comment on Hermione means a lot to me. Sometimes, it's rather hard to write her in character, even though she's a very interesting character to fiddle with. And I'm very glad you liked my poem. You could say that the whole story stemmed from that poem.
Merry (early) Christmas!
~Shina Laris |
Adeline3 Thursday 9th December 2004 14:28 | Unspoken Feelings |
Great story. I really liked it. Every part of it, which is rare. |
Monday 13th December 2004 23:33 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thank you for leaving a review! I'm very glad you liked every part of it.
~Shina Laris |
Delani Saturday 4th December 2004 16:01 | Unspoken Feelings |
Awwww. The poem was very Ron-esque. Great job. I'm more of an H/G-er, but I do enjoy R/H occasioanally, so well done.
Michelle |
Saturday 4th December 2004 22:23 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thanks for reviewing, Michelle! I'm glad that you enjoy this, despite it not being a H/G fic.
~Shina Laris |
Paula Saturday 4th December 2004 06:03 | Unspoken Feelings |
Aww! That was sweet.
I loved it.
I don't know if you're planning on it. But It would be great if you could write a sequel, telling what happens when Hermione gets to the Burrow.
Take care. |
Saturday 4th December 2004 12:06 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thanks for reviewing!
I'm very glad that you loved it. I'm sorry, but I'm not intending to write a sequel, mainly because I really don't have a plot for it as of yet. And sequel is one of those things that you just can't push. However, you can always imagine how they would react, right? (Considering they're Ron and Hermione...)
~Shina Laris |
p0tterfan Saturday 4th December 2004 01:03 | Unspoken Feelings |
Nicely written! Good job.
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Saturday 4th December 2004 12:08 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thanks for reviewing! Your compliments are really, really appreciated!
~Shina Laris |
Iris Friday 3rd December 2004 22:26 | Unspoken Feelings |
very cute...loved the poem
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Saturday 4th December 2004 12:17 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thank you for reviewing! I'm very glad that you loved the poem. I was afraid that it might seem a bit out of character for Ron. I believe him to be quite sweet and caring when he wants to, but he doesn't seem very much to be a poetry guy.
~Shina Laris |
Lostone Friday 3rd December 2004 20:58 | Unspoken Feelings |
Excellent!
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Saturday 4th December 2004 12:14 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thank you for taking your time and reviewing!
~Shina Laris |
Mop and Smith Friday 3rd December 2004 19:19 | Unspoken Feelings |
Awwww that poem was so sweet. I absolutly loved the whole thing! It was brilliant. Great job!! |
Saturday 4th December 2004 12:14 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thank you for the review! I'm glad you liked the poem, as that was what made me write the story in the first place.
~Shina Laris |
Pooca Friday 3rd December 2004 18:53 | Unspoken Feelings |
I thought Ron's "peck" was very cute, although there seemed to be a lot more buildup than was strictly neccessary. This was quite nice, though, well done! |
Saturday 4th December 2004 12:13 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thanks! Yes, I've always viewed a little peck to be more effective than a long snog. There's just something warm and satisfying about them. About the buildup, yes, you're absolutely right. I do tend to be a bit more wordy than necessary - but I promise to try and cut down a bit.
~Shina Laris |
parakletos Friday 3rd December 2004 18:48 | Unspoken Feelings |
Hi
I'm not a big R/H fan, but you made me want to care about them in this. I enjoyed it.
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Saturday 4th December 2004 12:10 | Unspoken Feelings (Author Response) |
Thanks for reviewing! The compliment you left is one of those that always make me glow. I'm really happy my story made you want to care more about Ron and Hermione. That, ultimately, is what all authors are after, hoping to make the readers care more about their main characters.
~Shina Laris |