pyromain
Tuesday 5th June 2007 10:27 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
| I really liked the "you" form of writing it gives a real different perspective to the story. |
GinervaMollyWeasley
Friday 29th December 2006 20:40 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
I love this one!!
Great story!
~GMW |
ginnysohma
Tuesday 26th December 2006 10:52 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
| aw, it was cute! merry christmas, all. |
daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 25th December 2006 20:36 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
| Wow. Are Harry and Ginny married? Very good story. |
pmv
Monday 25th December 2006 04:24 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
A lovely present for this Christmas morning...very well written. The descriptions of the shops and the weather made me feel like I was walking along the street beside them.
I also enjoyed the relationship between them. In a short piece, you were able to convey a lot of depth and layers.
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| Monday 25th December 2006 14:22 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| Thank you so much Really glad you enjoyed it! |
lacyrachil
Tuesday 5th December 2006 14:47 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
| Nice story. I love it. I absolutely adore the romantic side of HP. |
| Wednesday 6th December 2006 11:00 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| Thanks, gald you enjoyed it |
DADAGinny
Friday 17th December 2004 16:26 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
Nice. I like that fact that he has searched out muggle pubs for anonymity.
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| Friday 17th December 2004 17:13 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| What can I say, muggle pubs are something he found out about from the author...
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cootiepatootie
Saturday 11th December 2004 03:19 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
Oh This is Great!! I love the whole couple interaction thing. Even though you know who it is most of the story , it is SO nice to follow along.
How sweet that Harry would sneak off to get her Christmas present!
An Excellent Christmas Sweet!!! |
| Saturday 11th December 2004 14:32 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| Thanks, glad you liked it.
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Jner
Friday 10th December 2004 17:22 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
Very good. Well done. Did you find writing in second person difficult? I can't seem to get the flow of things in anything other than 3rd. I suppose it just takes practice? You did very well.
J |
| Friday 10th December 2004 17:41 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
Very good. Well done. Did you find writing in second
person difficult? I can't seem to get the flow of things in anything
other than 3rd. I suppose it just takes practice? You did very well. J
It actually flowed quite easily, a definate surprise to me
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hermionegreen
Friday 10th December 2004 15:19 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
Fantasmic fic, will you finish it? What did Harry get for Ginny? What did they get Ron and Hermione?
Thanks for the Ride
HermioneGreen |
| Friday 10th December 2004 17:39 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| Thanks, I haddn't planned a sequel, but I am having a go at writing
one. If it works out ok, you will find out what the present was.
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Eressea
Friday 10th December 2004 14:07 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
| I like the style. Using second person is a nice change. I also like how you don't name anyone untill the end. It had me wondering if it would be like one of those fics when you think it's Ron/Hermione, but it's really Arthur/Molly. |
| Friday 10th December 2004 17:37 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
The reason I didn't name anybody, wasn't so much to keep it a surprise
as I felt it made the relationship closer. I'm glad you liked it.
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mary-v
Friday 10th December 2004 13:34 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
THANK YOU bringandfly!!!Wonderful! Amazing.... I presume Mrs Potter is Ginny?That;s a stupid question! lol Wondeful work! Another fic brilliantly done!!
~Maria~ |
| Friday 10th December 2004 13:48 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| Could it be anyone else? LOL
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Bring and Fly
Friday 10th December 2004 04:38 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
My client would like to make a statement, M'lud. *grin*
No, seriously. You know I liked the first draft you sent me (even before you let me get my claws on it!) The whole scene is very evocative of slower days when the dogs lay around on before the hearth and beer came in wooden casks. I can hear the slow tick of a pendulum behind the quiet conversations. The voice you've written in gives it a different twist as well and I thought you did an excellent job of showing the closeness and understanding H/G share.
And its fluff! fluff to boot! What more could one desire?
(A sequel...?) Cara, running away to finish the pre-beta on your other chappie. |
| Friday 10th December 2004 13:09 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
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I'm
glad, because that is exactly the feeling I was hoping to convey, I
do think that after what Harry and indeed his friends will have gone
through by this point a slow and peaceful lifestyle, is at least what they
deserve..
As
for a sequel? Well you never know...
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Pugpal
Friday 10th December 2004 01:17 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
| Cute! Happy Holidays! |
| Friday 10th December 2004 13:04 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| Thanks
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Allie Kiwi
Thursday 9th December 2004 23:01 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
I really liked this story - very sweet, and perfect for the season. (well, if it wasn't supposedly hot and sunny where I am ;) ). I especially liked the 'voice' you used for it - very different, and making the story stand out from the crowd.
Looking forward to reading more of your work!
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| Friday 10th December 2004 13:11 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| Thanks, the POV came out of the original little post to my LJ, but even then it wasn't planned. A lot of fun to do though.
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Antonia East
Thursday 9th December 2004 15:02 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… |
| Heh, I loved this when I read it on lj and I love it still! |
| Thursday 9th December 2004 17:38 | Whoever It Was That Brought Me Here… (Author Response) |
| Thanks
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