ionik27
Saturday 6th September 2008 16:10 | After the Library |
chocolate is great in my book, but if you add a Harry chocolatey grin... yum, yum... "She tried not to imagine what it would be like to... so stop imagining! " lol
And great idea to put behind the twins decision to leave Hogwarts in style, like only they can, and to give the students and, of course, our dearest new Headmistress something more and explosive to remember them by!
And the whole Ginny/twins scene is absolutely perfect, especially the code words! (be sure to thank all your brothers for us, for giving you the inspiration)
As all of your stories, a master-piece! |
gymnastgal19
Saturday 29th March 2008 09:44 | After the Library |
ncie story!!!
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gymnastgal19
Sunday 11th November 2007 01:01 | After the Library |
i liked this!
Thanks for writting it!
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pyromain
Saturday 8th September 2007 10:55 | After the Library |
| one of the best missing moments I have read, there not jet an item but the base of the relation the will develop is made around this time in the story. I really liked you line of what kind of things happend to develop it. |
wamfof
Friday 7th September 2007 21:12 | After the Library |
This was a wonderful missing moment. I remember when I asked you for the rec I said I would read and review. As I was reading this tonight I remembered reading it and I thought I remembered reviewing it, but I must be wrong because I can locate no evidence of a review. Sorry for the delay in reviewing.
Anyway I think my favorite part was the scene with Ginny and the twins. They have a closeness in there that is heart warming. My little sister is ten years younger than me. I think the age spread kept us from being very close.
You did a great job of filling in some of the details about the planning of the swamp. |
rdprice29
Saturday 9th December 2006 19:38 | After the Library |
This was wonderful, and a perfect missing moment from OotP. If they don't put "Chocolate in the Library" in the movie, I might just storm out of the theater after that scene's skipped.
Great job! |
Eressea
Thursday 22nd December 2005 23:41 | After the Library |
| Aw, I love your sibling bonding scene where Fred swings Ginny around. |
| Tuesday 3rd January 2006 15:27 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Oh, thank you. :) Only truly wonderful brothers do things like swing their sisters around, eh?
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SillyGillie
Sunday 13th November 2005 12:17 | After the Library |
| Nice job. All your stories are wonderful. I really enjoy reading them. Excellent job! |
| Tuesday 3rd January 2006 15:26 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thank you, SG. :)
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brad
Wednesday 21st September 2005 18:27 | After the Library |
I had a 'Pirate Ginny' breakfast this morning, reading your stories
over my morning repast. Thanks for getting me in a good mood for
work today!
This was a nice story mixed in with OotP canon. In particular I
liked how you had Ginny mingling with other characters as well as Harry
- I enjoyed her conversations with Hermione, it helps bed down the
budding H/G romance when Hermione's there for confirmation. Nice
to see Hermione letting her hair down with a girlfriend, too. One
reason I like Ginny & Luna stories is that it lets us see a more
lighthearted Hogwarts, two schoolgirls having fun - difficult to do
when The Boy Who Lived is around. So I got a whiff of that same
lightheartedness when Ginny was with Hermione here.
And of course the exchange with Fred & George was nicely done.
Thank you for the story!
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| Sunday 2nd October 2005 17:57 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Hurrah - glad to have sent you to work in a good mood. That brief
image we got of Ginny and Hermione laughing together brought on this
interp of their relationship. And, well, Fred and George...I love
them. :)
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EvieMarie
Tuesday 31st May 2005 13:50 | After the Library |
| Yay! I almost want you to do a sequel to this, but set in Harry's sixth year... ooh, plot bunny! Like they meet again for chocolate in the library or something? i dunno... anyway, brilliant little fic. very well done! |
| Wednesday 1st June 2005 00:20 | After the Library (Author Response) |
What a fun plot bunny! (You should write it!)
Thanks. This is probably my fav. fic of mine--maybe because it
was my first, I dunno. Maybe, maybe because I love image of Harry
with a chocolatey grin.
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itsme07863
Monday 30th May 2005 22:30 | After the Library |
| awwwwwww.
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| Wednesday 1st June 2005 00:19 | After the Library (Author Response) |
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levotatingT
Tuesday 17th May 2005 17:15 | After the Library |
Very cute, but a little confusing. I really liked the chocalate grin
*grin*
Great job. keep writing!
levotatingT |
| Wednesday 1st June 2005 00:18 | After the Library (Author Response) |
Mmm. Chocolate. I like that grin too.
Thanks for the review! (I only just saw this. )
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Kelleypen
Monday 18th April 2005 12:05 | After the Library |
| I loved the code words to get into the twins dorm. The whole Ginny twin relationship was very well written. Nice fic! |
| Monday 18th April 2005 23:49 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thank you. :) I rather enjoyed the code words...and that entire sequence...
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Musings
Monday 18th April 2005 11:31 | After the Library |
| What a wonderful missing moment, Pirate Ginny! You've used canon to create such full and rich characterizations and it just makes me hope hope hope to see some H/G moments in 88 days! *squeal* I look forward to reading more of your work -- thanks for sharing it with us! |
| Monday 18th April 2005 18:43 | After the Library (Author Response) |
*squeeing with you* Oh, yeah. (I don't think I've been this excited about something since I was a kid...)
Thanks. :) I'm finally writing something new...you know,
getting in the mood for what's to come. (I am so looking forward
to having new canon to work with!)
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critmo
Thursday 13th January 2005 12:30 | After the Library |
| Well done! "Little Terror", indeed... |
critmo
Thursday 13th January 2005 12:30 | After the Library |
| Well done! "Little Terror", indeed... |
| Saturday 11th June 2005 23:02 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Hee. I can't wait to see what sort of a "Little Terror" Ginny will be in HBP.
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lovesprungfromhate
Tuesday 28th December 2004 19:33 | After the Library |
This was fantastic.
My favourite part was when Ginny went into Fred and George's dorm. It seemed just so natural, it was perfect!
What a great story, I'll look forward to seeing some more of your work! |
| Saturday 1st January 2005 04:12 | After the Library (Author Response) |
Thank you. I had lots of brothers to inspire me with F&G...
Glad that you enjoyed the story. |
Jner
Friday 24th December 2004 01:18 | After the Library |
Well done! Very cute; a nice bit of fluff for the holidays.
J |
| Saturday 1st January 2005 04:07 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thanks. I'm happy to provide the fluff. |
HPNana
Thursday 23rd December 2004 19:18 | After the Library |
You know, I never thought about "A Missing Moment" like this one. You captured the scene very well. Thanks for a good, fun read!
Happy Holidays
Best Rgds, HPNana |
| Saturday 1st January 2005 04:02 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thanks; I'm glad you enjoyed the read. |
Shadow Hider
Thursday 23rd December 2004 14:29 | After the Library |
| ^_^ |
DADAGinny
Thursday 23rd December 2004 09:23 | After the Library |
Oh! This was so good! I love these little outtakes, especially of this scene! Good job!
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| Saturday 1st January 2005 04:01 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thanks. |
Bring and Fly
Thursday 23rd December 2004 08:34 | After the Library |
I think this piece is so amazing for the insights into Ginny's head and the way you've extrapoloated her character from the few sketchy details we have in canon. Her voice and manner was totally believable! I enjoyed your portrayal of the twins as well as I think they can be quite hard to get them sounding authentic and I felt they came over really well.
I loved the hopeful, upbeat ending too.Come on, Harry! get clued up!!
I first read this story elsewhere when it was used in a 'guess the p+blocked+age game' and I begged the poster for a link. I enjoyed it then and I'm really delighted that you've chosen to archive at the Song. Got anything else you'd like to share? Pretty please? |
| Saturday 1st January 2005 04:00 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thank you much. I'm glad that you enjoyed the story the second time as well (What on earth is a "guess the age" game?). Anyhow...more is coming, whever my daughter allows me. |
p0tterfan
Thursday 23rd December 2004 00:42 | After the Library |
| Nice after story ... lets hope for some more h/g moments in book 6 ...
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| Saturday 1st January 2005 03:52 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| ::crossing fingers:: |
MagnoliaMama
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 21:39 | After the Library |
| How adorable! I love your characterizations in this, and how yous how us different sides to Ginny depending on who she's with (my favorite was the scene with Fred & George). I also love the play on "look" and when is a look more than just a look. Fluffy, but not saccharine. Great job! |
| Saturday 1st January 2005 01:19 | After the Library (Author Response) |
Thank you so much. :) Ginny seems to have secrets from different characters: F&G didn't know she could fly/Ron didn't know she was dating Michael Corner/Molly doesn't seem to realize her daughter is as devious as her sons... Anyhow, it made sense that she'd show a different face to different people. It was rather fun working through that. :)
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JenMusic
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 19:53 | After the Library |
| This is great! It fits with canon so well, I could really believe this is how it all happened. I love the bit about Ginny feeling as though she had traded Fred and George for Harry - I had never thought about that before. Excellent missing moment, and I'll look forward to reading more of your stuff. Thanks! |
| Thursday 30th December 2004 04:53 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thanks. :) I really do think Ginny might have felt that way--poor girl. (Though I expect there were times in her years at Hogwarts where she wished them gone!) |
Hank
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 19:25 | After the Library |
| Excellent story - you wove your story around the orignal perfectly or did you get this from Ginny herself? |
| Thursday 30th December 2004 03:19 | After the Library (Author Response) |
Yes. Er...ok. That's a lie. I just enjoy puzzling through the text.
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Antonia East
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 18:21 | After the Library |
Gosh. What an amazing story. You wrote Ginny so well, giving her feelings which fit in perfectly with what she does in canon. I also liked Ginny's friendship with Hermione, too.
The bit that really got me was the part with Fred and George, though. That was a side of it I'd never considered - the fact that they'd known they'd have to go but were prepared. I loved George being the slightly cautious one - that's how I see him too. Ginny feeling that she'd traded the twins for Harry was an incredible touch. You really fleshed out what JKR's given us in canon. |
| Thursday 30th December 2004 03:17 | After the Library (Author Response) |
Thank you.
Yeah...re: F & G. I kept rereading all the bits with them toward the end and this made the most sense. I couldn't understand why else F/G had established their shop's location. ;)
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Pooca
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 17:56 | After the Library |
| Mmm. Just as good as the first time. |
| Thursday 30th December 2004 03:01 | After the Library (Author Response) |
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thehopefulGinnyPotter
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 16:28 | After the Library |
| Awwwwwwwww, how cute. I liked the "look". That is neat. |
| Thursday 30th December 2004 03:01 | After the Library (Author Response) |
:) I'm glad you liked it. I'm a big fan of the "look." ;) |
Delani
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 14:49 | After the Library |
Wow! what a treat! There were some cl+blocked+ic lines in this, too many for me to post without feeling guilty for basically paraphrasing the whole thing! Well, well done!
Delani |
| Thursday 30th December 2004 02:58 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thanks! It was a treat to write. :) |
Mr. Intel
Wednesday 22nd December 2004 14:13 | After the Library |
| I just wanted to say that I really, really enjoyed this story.
You've got a great knack for characterization and a skill for
dialoge. I found myself nodding my head at everything Ginny said
- out loud and in her mind. The scene with Fred and George was
particularly good.
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| Thursday 30th December 2004 02:55 | After the Library (Author Response) |
| Thank you. :) I was giggling as I wrote that scene--one of those rare bits that came out right the first time. |
