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Arnel
Wednesday 27th July 2005 06:06 | A New Beginning | | This is a nice ending to The Future's End. I'm glad that the second time around, James' sending-off is happier than his first. | Mariposa
Friday 8th April 2005 18:13 | A New Beginning | | Strange paradox you have to resolve in getting this scene across but you did it well. You can tell they are sad about loosing the son that just got on the train but happy about how they were able to raise him. Well you got the idea across better than I can explain . Great job! | Robert Owen
Wednesday 15th December 2004 14:01 | A New Beginning | A touching end to this story, a bit bittersweet and a bit full of hope.
Robert
| Antonia East
Wednesday 15th December 2004 08:02 | A New Beginning | Okay...I am confused but intrigued. Whose child is James? (I'm
assuming H and G here, but at first I thought it was R and H) How
is time going over again? What happened the first time? Is
Hermione dead (choke)? Why does Ron need to get back to St
Mungos? Will you answer these questions in the next chapter?
Very interesting start.
| | Tuesday 28th December 2004 19:45 | A New Beginning (Author Response) | | Actually, this isn't a start. This is a missing moment from the story
"The Future's End." If you read that, you'll understand. This outtake
takes place after the final battle, but before the mirror scene.
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