Delfino
Saturday 18th June 2005 12:23 | I Will Be Waiting |
So far so good. At the moment I can't read anymore, this story kind of rips me apart. By the way, just because I'm insane and I need to say this, I personally know Mitch Album's nephew. We're best friends and I only found out a little while ago that he was related to him. Funny how the world works, huh? Anyway, great story so far. I just can't stand reading this for too long. Although, I am kind of annoyed with you because you killed Ron. He's my favorie and you killed him! Oh well. Good job anyway.....
Delfino |
| Saturday 18th June 2005 14:57 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
Wow, what a coincidence!
Glad you're enjoying it, keep going not all the chapters are this angsty!
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dophingirl79
Thursday 20th January 2005 01:52 | I Will Be Waiting |
| I wonder how Ron got Moody killed. I can't wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work. |
| Thursday 20th January 2005 16:56 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
| Then you will be glad to know I've just sent the chapter off to my pre-beta.
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dophingirl79
Thursday 20th January 2005 01:51 | I Will Be Waiting |
| I wonder why Ron |
dophingirl79
Thursday 20th January 2005 01:51 | I Will Be Waiting |
| I wonder why Ron was |
Gridley
Thursday 20th January 2005 01:23 | I Will Be Waiting |
| I'm enjoying this, and particularly looking forward to finding out who the other three will be - I've got guesses, but I'm probably wrong so I won't embarass myself. :-) |
Shadow Hider
Wednesday 19th January 2005 18:09 | I Will Be Waiting |
| *raises eyebrow* this should be interesting... |
Bunny
Wednesday 19th January 2005 10:03 | I Will Be Waiting |
Poignant reminder that the world does carry on, even after we will have left it. I liked the introduction of the Professors, already we can see the characters to be reckoned with.
Can't wait for the next chapter to see how Ron was responsible for Moody's death.
Constant Vigilance - will be in force waiting for the next chapter.
Sorry that was awful, but the story so far has been great. Val |
| Wednesday 19th January 2005 17:58 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
It wasn't that bad !
Glad you're enjoying it, the next chapter should be up by the end of the month (ish)
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DSDragon
Tuesday 18th January 2005 20:59 | I Will Be Waiting |
Ahhh!
MOODY is the Blue Man. Percy is the Captain!
Great chapter! I'm intrigued how you're going Moody's going to explain HIS Blue Man Scenario. |
| Wednesday 19th January 2005 14:07 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
Well, in my mind at least Moody is a combination of the Captain and the Blue Man, and Percy is more of the father role.
As you can imagine, to make this work in the Potterverse, I can't
shadow (and have no intention of doing so) the plot of The Five
People... exactly, but where plot points/events fit too well, they'll
apear although not always where you will expect them to!
So feel free, to keep shouting out things you spot.
Glad you're still enjoying it, and I hope some more of the Ron/Percy
stuff, brought their feelings in to a clearer context for you. It was
always my intention to deal with some of that at the start of this
chapter, but your comments certainly helped when it came to the fianl
edit.
Thanks
Bart
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Fuzzball
Tuesday 18th January 2005 17:38 | I Will Be Waiting |
| just a little nitpicking.. is Camilla Bones related to Susan Bones? If so did Susan Bones not get married and get knocked up out of wedlock or unless the husband took her name. otherwise interesting story so far. |
| Tuesday 18th January 2005 18:19 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
just a little nitpicking.. is Camilla Bones related to
Susan Bones? If so did Susan Bones not get married and get
knocked up out of wedlock or unless the husband took her name.
otherwise interesting story so far. Camilla is a younger cousin of Susan, around 12 years her junior, so she's now the perfect age to lead Hogwarts.
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lizzyrose89
Tuesday 18th January 2005 17:36 | I Will Be Waiting |
Oh excellent! Where are they? Where Moody died? What did Ron do wrong? Or didn't he - it's only Moody thinking that and Ron has to show him that it isn't?
*sooo confuzzled*
This is such a great story, but the bit I'm particularly waiting for is Harry. You're going to put him at the end, aren't you! Evil!
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| Tuesday 18th January 2005 18:14 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
Or didn't he - it's only Moody thinking that and Ron has to show him that it isn't? *sooo confuzzled* This is such a great story, but the bit I'm particularly waiting for
is Harry. You're going to put him at the end, aren't you! Evil!
Now you don't really expect me to answer that, do you?
Harry, makes a very fleeting appearence in the next chapter (fleeting as in 'blink and you'll miss it' ) other than that I can't tell you.
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Kelleypen
Tuesday 18th January 2005 17:25 | I Will Be Waiting |
| I'm loving this. You've done some nice revising since the LJ version too. You're sense of the next life is very much in harmony with mine. |
| Tuesday 18th January 2005 17:31 | I Will Be Waiting (Author Response) |
Yeah, I think there are getting on for an extra 800 -1000 words added
to that version, plus normal post beta editing, I felt it need more,
even though it is essentually a transition chapter, and Cara more than
rose to the occasion of 'a few suggestions' that I asked of her.
Glad you like it!
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