sherriola
Monday 15th June 2015 23:28 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| i'm new to this site but came here to read a new story by a friend. I feel I've exhausted all the Sirius fics on another site, so I did a keyword search here, and your story came up. The summary intrigued me. I love the prologue. already I'm captivated, drawn in and definitely want to read on and discover the secrets. Who was the former powerful wizard? Who is the current one who can work the magic? Is it good or evil? What is going to happen to Harry in this year? will Sirius return or will he not? so many questions, and I'm going to dig in and read on to get the answers. fantastic start. |
lizzierichards
Monday 13th September 2010 23:13 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| Wow! I'm a new reader of this story. That was an intriguing beginning. So Sirius us likely not dead? And Harry is likely the heir? Is one of the founders the original master of the veil? Great job, you've caught my interest. I can't wait to read more of this story that has such great potential. |
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 28th September 2006 09:19 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| So who is the last wizard who Harry is heir to? You mention three friends. That could be James (Sirius, Remus, and Peter). But this sounds more distant past (and Sirius' later mention of work as an Unspeakable is more of a red herring -- the adding of the stone benches to watch the wonders performed would certainly be remembered of James). So I'm guessing Godric Gryffindor (Slytherin, Ravenclaw, and Hufflepuff being the three friends and the founding of Hogwarts the other pursuit). |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 26th September 2006 16:14 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
Very interesting. So Sirius is not dead? Just trapped in a void. And Harry is the heir, but doesn't know it. Could become complicated (and interesting). So the veil is like the Sorting Hat -- sort of alive. Why doesn't it talk to Harry?
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crazyredhead
Thursday 3rd August 2006 10:28 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| this sounds fun. the new master is harry please |
daniel_r_crazy22
Thursday 25th May 2006 16:12 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| So the veil is somewhat, in away,... alive? Wicked. I like it. On to the next chapter! |
Wooster
Thursday 25th May 2006 13:13 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| Whoa. Now THAT was different. Very, very interesting! I can't wait to read more of this...what a cool idea! |
Dragen
Wednesday 24th May 2006 09:58 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| Great start to the story, so how we going to see Sirius agian with the artifact for Harry?? |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Friday 11th November 2005 11:42 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
Well written, love where this is going!
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harry'sgurl
Sunday 12th June 2005 09:52 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| This is a really good way to start a story. It makes the reader actually want to read the prologue. Great start! |
| Thursday 4th August 2005 12:23 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
| Thanks...I like the mystery of a good prologue...what is up with that veil?
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Vivalocious
Monday 24th January 2005 16:57 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
Very interesting! Could you be talking about Sirius? I guess I'll just have to read the next chapter to find out!
V.R.F. |
| Monday 24th January 2005 18:04 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
| I will give you the same hint I gave another reviewer, the person in
question could hear voices behind the veil. Thanks for reading
and reviewing.
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Arnel
Monday 24th January 2005 14:03 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| This is a wonderful beginning. At first, I thought you were writing about the locked door Harry couldn't open that night: then it dawned on me that it was the arch. Great set-up for the rest of the story. Now for chapter2... |
| Monday 24th January 2005 18:05 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
| Yeah what is behind that door? Thanks for reading.
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p0tterfan
Thursday 20th January 2005 22:08 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| Ah ... the precursor to the return of Sirius? :) Interesting beginning, let's see where you go with this.
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| Monday 24th January 2005 10:56 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
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nightcrawler1089
Thursday 20th January 2005 20:59 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
Very nice start...I hope it's Harry. Can't wait until this is updated.
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| Monday 24th January 2005 18:06 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
| Who could it be? That has been a very popular question in the
reviews...same hint for everyone. The person could hear voices
behind the veil. But like I say...maybe the question should not
be who...but where are the voices?
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Aberforth's Avatar
Thursday 20th January 2005 17:04 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| This is a very intriguing start to your story. I'm curious to see where you're going with the Arch and the Veil. |
| Monday 24th January 2005 18:08 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
| Thank you for reading. It means quite alot. I find myself
strangely addicted to the counter showing the number of people who have
read the story.
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Pugpal
Thursday 20th January 2005 17:03 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
| Cool! Great job! |
| Monday 24th January 2005 18:07 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
| Thanks! I am always down for a thumbs up.
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LadyGriff
Thursday 20th January 2005 16:18 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
Nice start. |
| Monday 24th January 2005 18:09 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
| Thanks.
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Crys
Thursday 20th January 2005 16:00 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
Hmm. Very mysterious.
So either Voldemort (known Heir of Slytherin) can control the Veil, or an unknown wizard/witch in that fight (but not Sirius) is Heir of Gryffindor (we don't KNOW Harry's Heir of Gryffindor) and they can do control the Veil.
Very clever POV. |
| Monday 24th January 2005 10:58 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
I wonder who it is...oh wait I do know.
I'll give you a hint, the person heard voices behind the veil.
Maybe the real question should be, who did those voices belong too?
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Cera
Thursday 20th January 2005 13:56 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind |
I really like this beginning. I haven't read a story that focuses on the veil, and I'm anxious to see what you do with it.
I'll be here for the next chapter.
Sarah |
| Monday 24th January 2005 18:09 | Harry Potter and the Secrets of the Mind (Author Response) |
| My very first review ever. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Honest!
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