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Thursday 23rd June 2005 04:54 | A Lioness | Wow your story is grate. | Hexadecimal
Friday 21st January 2005 12:21 | A Lioness | | Oh this was excellent! We're all somewhat used to short little blurbs from McGonagall, and this is an excellent POV for the other way. I can't wait to see what else you have for this story. | Crys
Friday 21st January 2005 07:55 | A Lioness | *blink*
Wow. Very powerful ending scene.
This chapter really sets the tone and shows the inner thoughts and feelings of a relatively unexplored character.
Please keep the chapters coming! | the toaster
Friday 21st January 2005 06:24 | A Lioness | | *applauds* Oh, that was wonderful. Showed such a smooth writing style 'n everything. Bravo! | Robert Owen
Friday 21st January 2005 03:27 | A Lioness | | Nice start to this. A great look at what happened after McG's return and good look at what some of our friends must be feeling at the moment. Bravo! | MightyFlye
Friday 21st January 2005 02:25 | A Lioness | | Very enjoyable. Not often we see things from that perspective. I'm looking forward to more.
| Pugpal
Friday 21st January 2005 01:20 | A Lioness | | Nice ending! Very powerful words. More power to your quill! | Aggiebell
Thursday 20th January 2005 21:25 | A Lioness | I love Minnie, especially the way you've written her here. She's
strong, yes, but also compassionate. Her guilt over Sirius's
death, especially after delivering that lecture to Albus, was
poignant. Her speech was inspiring, You could tell how much
she cares about her students in what she said and how she said
it. And I could quite easily picture McGonagall from the books
doing and saying everything you have her do and say.
I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Julie
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