hermionenessie
Sunday 24th January 2010 23:18 | Amazing Valentine |
| Loved it! I LOLed at the last line, and now I really want some brandy cremes myself! Ron punching Harry was also funny as I knew that he had it all wrong and would soon regret it. This is a very cute, fun story. |
saulick
Tuesday 22nd April 2008 12:14 | Amazing Valentine |
| Very Nice!!!! Well done. |
gymnastgal19
Friday 26th October 2007 14:05 | Amazing Valentine |
| interesting story |
pyromain
Tuesday 4th September 2007 11:28 | Amazing Valentine |
| Ron never was the smartest of the weasley's |
Aqua Fountain*
Wednesday 4th April 2007 06:57 | Amazing Valentine |
Brandy Cremes? Even the name sounds discusting to me. Of course, I'm just a kid, and I've never tasted brandy before. I have smelt it though. But I am a fairly picky eater (or drinker)....
Interesting story |
Sockless
Saturday 6th May 2006 17:31 | Amazing Valentine |
| I must tell you that the Airplane refrence had me in stiches! Wonderful job, par usual! |
Crookshanks
Sunday 4th September 2005 11:35 | Amazing Valentine |
| aww so cute |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Friday 2nd September 2005 20:12 | Amazing Valentine |
cute.i liked it.
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XiaoXiao
Friday 28th January 2005 00:05 | Amazing Valentine |
| Very sweet. Ron was so adorably clueless, with his mistaken assumptions. I also loved Devious!Harry...buying chocolates for Ginny and sending Hermione hers without letting Ron know. Very nice. |
| Sunday 6th February 2005 06:39 | Amazing Valentine (Author Response) |
| I do like to have Ron be a bit clueless from time to time. Thanks for the review |
Harry/Ginnyfan4ever
Thursday 27th January 2005 21:17 | Amazing Valentine |
*laughs*
Lovely. I thought that the 'Harry Weasley' line was simply...well, I wanted to cry. Then again, I am overly sentimental, so....
Maybe a sequel or companion piece with Harry's Point of View? |
| Sunday 6th February 2005 06:39 | Amazing Valentine (Author Response) |
| No plans for a companion piece right now, but maybe in the future. Thanks for the review! |
St Margarets
Thursday 27th January 2005 18:52 | Amazing Valentine |
Oh poor jealous Ron! I liked the brandy creams and your ability to set the scene. The repetition with the dust under the bed was very clever (and made me wonder how clean it was under my beds. LOL.)
I also liked the H/G at the end of course! I also liked the Yule Ball nod - when we all knew R/Hr were destined.
I thought you r characterization of Ron was well done - as was Harry's. Their friendship is a beautiful thing. Thanks for sharing. |
| Sunday 6th February 2005 06:40 | Amazing Valentine (Author Response) |
| I liked the idea of Ron getting a second chance at the Yule Ball, because he messed up so badly the first time around. Glad you liked it too. Thanks for the review |
wokka42
Wednesday 26th January 2005 23:52 | Amazing Valentine |
| Oh good Lord, I just noticed the throwaway Legilimency reference! Brilliant! |
| Sunday 6th February 2005 06:41 | Amazing Valentine (Author Response) |
| Gotta get some H/G in there The Legilimency is something that I could see Ron being very unsettled by, if he thought about it... |
wokka42
Wednesday 26th January 2005 23:49 | Amazing Valentine |
Delightful! I really enjoyed your understated, ironic sense of humor. The dialogue is also handled really well. The tension between Ron and Harry was also well-done, and I loved getting a little unexpected H/G as a bonus. Nice job! |
tante
Wednesday 26th January 2005 21:17 | Amazing Valentine |
I like this from Ron's point of view. So little is done with him as the main character. Fun story.
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| Sunday 6th February 2005 06:42 | Amazing Valentine (Author Response) |
| I adore Ron. I think that, in terms of personality, he's the closest to me. He's always great fun to write as well, because he has these wonderful OTT moments that are great fun to come up with. Thanks for the review! |
mary-v
Wednesday 26th January 2005 16:55 | Amazing Valentine |
Ohhhhhh! This was brilliant! Everything, right down to the brandy cremes, was perfect. Call me craxzy, but I find it especially funny that no matter what, the Brandy Cremes are considered amazing! lol You had Ron's character down to an art! He was exactly how I expected him to be! Brilliant work! Anf perfectly fluffy to!
~Maria~ |
| Sunday 6th February 2005 06:43 | Amazing Valentine (Author Response) |
| Ah, chocolate... No matter how bad we feel, it makes everything better. Besides, Ron's driven by his stomach |
Jedione
Wednesday 26th January 2005 10:15 | Amazing Valentine |
Very nice! Loved the Airplane quote too, or at least a paraphrasing of it.
Great Job!
Thanks |
| Sunday 6th February 2005 06:47 | Amazing Valentine (Author Response) |
| I've wanted to fit an Airplane reference into one of my stories for a long time, and other than the Danger: Vacuum scene from Airplane 2, that was my favourite joke. Having Ginny, who I've always seen as having a very mischievous sense of humour, use the line seemed just right. Thanks for the review |
Megan SQ
Wednesday 26th January 2005 10:00 | Amazing Valentine |
| You made this old theme look fresh with nice writing and an original
take on how the Trio's relationships will evolve. I'd like to point out
one thing, though: only animals are bred, flowers are grown. Unless, of
course, Neville's offering was a cross between plant and animal
life.
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| Sunday 6th February 2005 06:48 | Amazing Valentine (Author Response) |
I really do know nothing about gardening I had an idea that crossing different plants was called crossbreeding, but I freely admit that I am almost completely ignorant on the subject.
Glad to hear you enjoyed the story anyway, and liked the way that Harry and the others have mature a little. Thanks for the review |
