meandyou2
Saturday 13th December 2008 09:20 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
I just finished reading the first story. I hope Harry is going to get a backbone soon.
Tom is able to stop a portkey???? and unknown portkey made by big D????? a untimed portkey???????? simply by being in Harry's head?????? WOW!
I hope there is an explination for that coming. It should be as good as how Death Eaters got into head quarters when big D is the secret keeper from the last story. Ow wait that was never explained.
Don't look at me like that.....just playing the devils advocate. Pointing out things that drive us readers crazy.
I really liked the other story and this one should be better. |
GryffindorDragon
Friday 20th October 2006 10:07 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
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daniel_r_crazy22
Friday 23rd June 2006 21:59 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| It is Wormtail isn't it? 'Cause I can't think of anything else to match something small enough to come out of the bushes and shriek and still give horror to Harry. I hope I am right, but at the same time, don't 'cause then, Voldemort is somewhere close. And that is not good. |
Muggle Witch
Monday 2nd May 2005 08:02 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| WOW! what a great chapter. well done. |
little_one
Friday 18th March 2005 13:19 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
Loved Bloody Summer. Love Year of the One even more. You've got quite a way with words. Keep up the good work! |
reading-rider
Sunday 6th February 2005 21:51 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
It didn't take you long to get this story into full swing! I know this is going to be a great one, and I am really looking forward to reading it! Thanks!! |
Delani
Saturday 5th February 2005 22:47 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
Oh you are evil! But I'm addicted to your evil in a bizarrely delightful way. I guess it's lines like "Wormtail with his Cabbage Patch doll Tom" that make your story irresistable! I was so excited to see the sequel up and running, and believe me, you have not let me down! Who knows what lay ahead of Harry (and Harry and Harry). I've never been too big on the series ending (aka Voldemort's demise) in book six, but I don't know what can happen in the course of a few chapters, so work away! Great job!
Delani |
SillyGillie
Monday 31st January 2005 15:32 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
What shrieks??
Write more asap! Love it! |
DADAGinny
Monday 31st January 2005 10:01 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
What a cliffie! Need more!
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SillyGillie
Sunday 30th January 2005 14:13 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| This story is amazing! I'm so thrilled you're writing a sequel! I can't imagine what is at the base of the hill! I envy your creativity! You're so brilliant! I would have never thought of having a diversion like that, making three Harry's! Fantastic job!!!! |
kaiserzacc
Sunday 30th January 2005 07:51 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Excellent writing style...i look foreward to more |
tmh
Saturday 29th January 2005 22:38 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Well you have me sitting on the edge of my seat. I look forward to your next installment. |
tokris
Saturday 29th January 2005 14:03 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
I loved this chapter! It is a fresh way of getting Harry to school I haven't seen before. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Ima Quidditch Fan
Friday 28th January 2005 14:53 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Oh this is so scary! Poor Harry - will he ever catch a break? I am surprised he is still alive in this story. |
Littlelizzie
Friday 28th January 2005 13:08 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| oh, the horror, more suspense. |
fsecada
Friday 28th January 2005 12:34 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
"It was a nice day when Harry Potter stepped outside the Burrow to travel back to Hogwarts—so nice that he did it thrice."
I had to back up and read this twice, but the rest of the chapter made it clear. What an excellent way to begin the story! I loved it all, especially Charlie being so macho. I'm assuming he was Harry number three, right? <grin>
Ok so now it seems like we have another traitor in the order. Jeez, they really need to work on their security! And what's the thing that's shrieking around the shrieking shack? |
rdprice29
Friday 28th January 2005 10:39 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
Oooooo....evil cliffie! You're mean!
I'm glad to see you've started your seuquel, and the first chapter is great! I can't wait to see what just popped out at Harry from the bushes.
Great job! |
blinieldar
Friday 28th January 2005 09:04 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Grrr! That was just mean. Its only the first chapter and you already
have me waiting for more. You could have at least given me a chance not
to like it!
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Melindaleo
Friday 28th January 2005 08:18 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
Woo Hoo! You're back! Yippppppeee. And leave it to you to start us off with one of your impossible cliffies! Grrrr. Nicely done.
Our poor hero can't catch a break, but I love that it was Ginny who knew who the real Harry was right away. Loved Charlie and Malfoy pretending to be him as well. The portkey squeeze was brilliant.
Can't wait to see what happens next ;) |
Arnel
Friday 28th January 2005 08:12 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
When I saw that this opening chapter of your sequel I forgot what I was going to read first and had a look at your story first. I was happily not disappointed; between this story and Melindaleo's sequel, poor Harry just can't catch any breaks! I love the thought of coercing Draco into becoming a "Harry" decoy and the suspense you employed with the interrupted Portkey. But did you have to end the chapter with such a blatent cliff-hanger? Oh, you're evil!!!!!
I'm definitely hoping you'll post the next chapter SOON! |
Dice
Friday 28th January 2005 06:05 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
Bloody Hell... Why the cliffhanger when I'm trying to get to work?
Just as soon as Harry thinks it's safe... well reletavely safe. Well, I hope to see what the thing was soon.
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juliet
Friday 28th January 2005 03:14 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
That was fantastic! Full of suspense, I am sitting here almost
going blue from holding my breath as I read. And
then..................a cliffhanger. Not nice at all.
Look forward to the next installment
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