bleeblahblee Thursday 8th April 2010 07:26 | February Fifteenth |
You've outdone yourself, beautiful story. It's well written and it's absolutely hilarious! |
Thursday 8th April 2010 11:48 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Oh, this is an old story! I really enjoyed writing it with the alternating points of view. Thanks for reading! |
gymnastgal19 Thursday 29th October 2009 21:06 | February Fifteenth |
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joannacamilley Tuesday 17th March 2009 18:59 | February Fifteenth |
lol, February 15 is my birthday!! Its great cuz I get chocolates on my birthday! |
Wednesday 18th March 2009 04:25 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Yay for 1/2 price chocolate! Thanks for reading! |
gymnastgal19 Monday 28th April 2008 07:49 | February Fifteenth |
haha! cute story! I lovedit thats actualy a good idea to celebrate valentines day on the 15... I personally am not a big fan... all they do is hike up the price of everything and its hardly romantic going somewhere due to it being crowded...
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Tuesday 29th April 2008 13:26 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Harry never had good luck with Valentines so I thought this was a good way to continue the streak, but still end up h appy. Thanks for reading! |
harry_ginnyfan Friday 8th February 2008 19:00 | February Fifteenth |
Cute story! Cheers! |
Saturday 9th February 2008 06:27 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! |
gymnastgal19 Wednesday 19th December 2007 20:47 | February Fifteenth |
i loved this story! so cute how harry was writting a letter to sera about why the celebrated on the 15 instead of the 14
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Thursday 20th December 2007 18:18 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Oh, you've been reading all my H/G stories! LOL - there are a lot of them, aren't there? I also have a lot at SIYE that aren't here. I really think you might like Magic Within, Magic Without. It was written before HBP, and it's about how H/G get together. One of my favorites still. Thanks for reading and for all of your nice reviews. If it wasn't a week before Christmas I'd answer each one. |
psycholis Monday 22nd October 2007 23:51 | February Fifteenth |
The more I peruse PhoenixSong, it inevitably leads me back to your stories. It must mean something.. I know I'm discovering all these pieces years later, but let me say they are quite wonderful. The first person perspective takes a bit to get used to, but it worked in this case. The flashback type story isn't the first I've read, but it works okay as a plot device. The interactions between the Gryffindor boys is classic as always. Harry and Ginny's misunderstandings create some tension of course, but nothing that can't be fixed with a bit of snogging.. I will probably end up reading all of your fics at one point, so look forward to more reviews down the line. |
Wednesday 24th October 2007 17:31 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked this very old story! Looking back on it, I wish H/G had had a few evenings/events like these to liven up their days at Hogwarts.
I have a lot of stories, so beware! And not just H/G - I do like my minor characters. Thanks for reading! |
Ardie Bea Monday 16th April 2007 01:13 | February Fifteenth |
Why haven't I seen this one before!? Delighted to find it now and enjoy a very typically good St. Mags fluff-fest.
Cheers |
Monday 16th April 2007 04:06 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Glad you liked it. It was fun to write! |
ibelieveintruelove Tuesday 13th March 2007 19:08 | February Fifteenth |
Adorable! And is their daughter's name Lily, by any chance?
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Wednesday 14th March 2007 15:02 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I see you found out what H/G's daughter's name is by reading the other stories. Even though I wrote this two years ago, I thought they should have an inquisitive daughter to keep Harry on his toes. |
lacyrachil Wednesday 6th December 2006 12:49 | February Fifteenth |
I LOVE this story! It could not be any better. |
GryffindorDragon Wednesday 4th October 2006 14:12 | February Fifteenth |
Neville didn't ask Ginny, he asked Jeanne out. Jeanne talked Ginny into coming too and Neville wanted her to. So Ginny wouldn't have responded to Harry in the way she did -- she would have said that she would love to but Jeanne (and Neville) wants her to accompany them, would Harry mind making it a foursome . Sorry to sound picky, but you usually have much better scenarios .
Ah, I see you deal with that later in the story .
Now that's more like it -- the creative shift to writing a letter to their 13 year old daughter .
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Thursday 5th October 2006 08:32 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Glad you liked it. I enjoy writing one shots - especially for challenges. |
XORynkleOX Friday 1st September 2006 14:06 | February Fifteenth |
Aww! Okay, that was so cute.
For a second, I was worried that this was slash- all the things about "the best third year girl's voice I could use" or something sort of freaked me out until I read through to the end. It was so adorable!
Great job! |
Friday 1st September 2006 18:46 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
LOL - no slash at Phoenix Song (or in my stories!) I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading! |
Grandma Kate Sunday 6th August 2006 22:06 | February Fifteenth |
I like any of your stories with Days of Destiny references. |
Monday 7th August 2006 06:21 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
LOL! Yay for soap operas in small doses! |
keira azul Sunday 6th August 2006 00:13 | February Fifteenth |
As always, very funny and cute.+ |
Sunday 6th August 2006 07:16 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I had fun with this! And this was a contest I actually won! LOL |
ThaliaLupin Monday 10th April 2006 14:36 | February Fifteenth |
"I only went with Neville and Jeanne because Neville was afraid of Jeanne's chest and Jeanne was afraid that Neville only liked her for her chest!"
Hahaha
Very cute! I'm surprised that I missed this one. But very glad I finally found it.
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Monday 10th April 2006 16:01 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
It's an oldie! I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write. |
lucky_black_cat Saturday 25th March 2006 15:38 | February Fifteenth |
Wonderful, you had me in stitches all through it. The 'prat brigade' thing was really funny. Incidentally, I wouldn't want to come near that bonfire of Seamus's - alcohol and hormones were never a good combination. Thanks for yet another wonderful read! ~Sonia |
Saturday 25th March 2006 16:23 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I had fun with this one. Hogwarts was a bit more typical high school than it is in the books, but this was for a challenge and I felt I could be a little less canon-like. Thanks for reading! |
Spell Weaver Thursday 16th February 2006 05:53 | February Fifteenth |
I found your story to be compelling, engaging, and sweet. Ironically, I read it on February 15th. Thank you for sharing it. I have added you to my "author update" list. Cheers! |
Thursday 16th February 2006 07:22 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
LOL The perfect day to read this story! I remembered this story today when I wrote a check. I'm so glad someone read it! Thanks. |
Ishi Tuesday 25th October 2005 16:03 | February Fifteenth |
Awwwwww....that's so cute!
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cckeimig Friday 21st October 2005 20:44 | February Fifteenth |
This story was great fun! Glad I finally came across it. Prat brigade indeed. :-) |
Saturday 22nd October 2005 04:58 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I had fun writing it. I hope there's another challenge soon so I'll have an excuse to write a fluffy one-shot. Thanks for reading. |
Videl Sunday 18th September 2005 21:16 | February Fifteenth |
I don't usually like first person narration, and I usually don't like multiple POV's. But you definitely proved me wrong here! Wow! This was cute and funny. I liked the way you ended it too. It gave it closure from a mature perspective!
Well written! |
Crookshanks Sunday 4th September 2005 11:54 | February Fifteenth |
he he prat brigade.. I like it.. V british! |
XXXmister-E werepony unit Friday 2nd September 2005 21:10 | February Fifteenth |
hehehehehahahahah!that was soooooo funny! i loved it!
yours truly,whatever my name is.
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nixtear Sunday 10th July 2005 20:57 | February Fifteenth |
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Bella Friday 1st July 2005 15:00 | February Fifteenth |
That was sooo good! Definitely one of the fluffiest fics I've ever read, and I mean that as a very high compliment. Funny, cute,qitty, quirky, and the ending was perfect. Favorite quotes:
<<That is when I realized that we were all prats. A regular prat brigade.>>
<<So Jeanne, Neville and I, along with Jeanne's chest, went to Hogsmeade on Friday night.>>
Great story! Bella |
Friday 1st July 2005 16:27 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Oh, I love my fluff! This was a fun story to write! Thanks for reading! |
levotatingT Thursday 23rd June 2005 19:51 | February Fifteenth |
OMG. that is so, so, so cute. I can definitly see why it won. I loved the whole story. Awsome
great job, keep writing, and PLez write back
levotatingT |
Friday 24th June 2005 09:35 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. It was fun to write pure fluff for H/G without all that other stuff Harry has to worry about! You can get away with it in a one-shot! Thanks for reading! |
Fuzzy Thursday 26th May 2005 21:52 | February Fifteenth |
Lol. Very funny and extremely cute! |
Delfino Sunday 1st May 2005 13:18 | February Fifteenth |
this is so cute! is that all there is? more to come? please keep writing! |
Monday 2nd May 2005 12:48 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks - I'm glad you liked it. I'd love to say that I have a married H/G fic. posted somewhere - but I don't. It's only in a notebook at the moment. But I have lots of other H/G stories. Thanks for reviewing! |
Rozzie Monday 18th April 2005 21:40 | February Fifteenth |
That was so cute and funny. I've had a St. Margarets marathon today. I've read the last three or four stories off this site that I hadn't read yet in almost one sitting. Excellent as usual. You are so good at both one shots and chaptered stories. I can't wait to read more in the future. |
Tuesday 19th April 2005 08:55 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks for taking the time to have a marathon reading. I guess I have written a lot! Oh well, it keeps me off the streets! Thanks for your kind reviews. |
Narumi Friday 18th March 2005 16:25 | February Fifteenth |
I really liked this story, it was pity and still sweet. The ending was really cute. Thanks for helping me to not do my homework! |
Tuesday 19th April 2005 08:53 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Hee - I guess if it was math homework it's okay. . . You didn't hear this from me! |
vertru Tuesday 15th March 2005 22:06 | February Fifteenth |
Very nice short fic. I enjoyed this, and the twist at the end is quite a nice touch. Good job!
Vern |
Medievalist Tuesday 1st March 2005 21:06 | February Fifteenth |
I so enjoyed this piece, and thought it was truly the best of the
contest entries. I really appreciated the fact that you took
seriously the charge of "Valentine's Day gone wrong," with the use of
February fifteenth keeping this from being "Valentine's Day almost gone wrong, but salvaged at the last minute."
It is impressive that four of the five "required phrases" you included
fit seamlessly in the story. Also impressive is the first-person
narrative, particularly the inclusion of enough self-criticism and
honest description to be interesting, but not so much as to immediately
give away that the story is being told so much later.
There were a couple of proofreading slips, but they didn't really
detract from the overall effect. (Sorry to mention them at all,
but it's a pet peeve.)
Thanks for writing such a fun story.
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Thursday 3rd March 2005 15:43 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks for your kind review. I really had a good time writing this one. I will try to see what I can do about the mistakes - I can't access the story once it is up - so I will have to go through my beta. |
Jacynthe Friday 25th February 2005 03:02 | February Fifteenth |
Hooray! That clunking noise in the background was the romance meter ... and those replacement parts straight from the factory are SO hard to come by these days.
On a slightly less goofy note, I was going to say that you seem to have a frightening degree of intuition into the adolescent male psyche, but reading through your review responses, I now see why. The prat brigade indeed ...
Nicely, nicely done. |
Friday 25th February 2005 04:55 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Hi Jacynthe, thanks for your review! I didn't have an author's note because I was supposed to "hiding" - but I guess you don't "hide" at Phoenix Song. Anyway - I owe you the credit for giving me the idea for having H/G writing this down for their child. You mentioned that in a review of Six Days over at SIYE. So here is your credit - past due! Thanks again. |
Gabriella Du Sult Sunday 20th February 2005 19:15 | February Fifteenth |
I love how you write, regardless of point of view. I'm sorry I don't review your work more often -- but I'm always excited when I see the name St. Margarets attached to a title.
Favorite quotes: "That is when I realized that we were all prats. A regular prat brigade."
"Did I mention that as part of my third-year-girl-in-love-with-a-bass-player persona, I had memorized Ginny's schedule?"
Great work as always. |
Monday 21st February 2005 06:55 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Well, I'm glad you reviewed today! It's always nice to know that people are reading and exactly who is reading as well! Thanks again! |
shayna Thursday 17th February 2005 03:09 | February Fifteenth |
cute tho rather OOC.... |
Thursday 17th February 2005 05:52 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I was hoping that the fact they were telling the story from the distance of time would cover their more "mature" way of looking at things. Oh well. |
Astrid Tuesday 15th February 2005 17:11 | February Fifteenth |
That's so sweet! No wonder you won; you write perfect G/H stories. |
Wednesday 16th February 2005 05:55 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I do love H/G - they are a great pair to write about. Thanks for your review! |
clareindil Monday 14th February 2005 23:28 | February Fifteenth |
Whooppee! Congratulations!
I also had a sneaking suspicion it might be you but voted for Feb. 15th because I thought it was a great story whoever the author was.
clare |
Tuesday 15th February 2005 06:00 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Well at least you weren't entirely sure! So part of my disguise worked! Thanks for voting for this story and your review! |
mary-v Monday 14th February 2005 16:00 | February Fifteenth |
Ha! I knew the writing style was familiar! I actually did sort of guess it might be you, but didn;t want to say anything for fear of embarassement! Actually I voted for you! Well, congratulations on your win!
~Maria~ |
Monday 14th February 2005 16:09 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I see that I was kidding myself with my "great disguise" of first person point of view! Thanks for voiting for me and for being so sweet! |
Penny Lane Monday 14th February 2005 11:52 | February Fifteenth |
Woohoo! I guessed correctly that this was your fic, St. M! But then, the only reason I guessed it was you was because I recognized Jeanne from Red Is The Heart, so I suppose I'm not entitled to feel too smug.
Like many of your other reviewers, I really loved the way you moved between Harry's and Ginny's pov -- it was very smooth and fluid, and very clever of you to use the same lines to connect them. Your Harry was even more endearing than usual -- no wonder Ginny loves him! And the part about Ginny going to Hogsmeade with Neville, Jeanne, and Jeanne's chest was just too funny.
Congratulations on your win! |
Monday 14th February 2005 15:50 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Pennylane, you cracked the code! I'm afraid I'm not very stealth after all - one person pointed out that I reviewed everyone but myself - yet another give away. Good thing I don't plan a life of crime! LOL. Thanks for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
Ima Quidditch Fan Sunday 13th February 2005 21:35 | February Fifteenth |
Congratulations! A wonderful treat for Valentine's Day!
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Monday 14th February 2005 06:19 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks LeAnn! And it's a story you didn't have to beta! LOL. I don't think I'll have as good luck with the one at SIYE as I did here! |
Rutzy Sunday 13th February 2005 15:53 | February Fifteenth |
the best V-day fic to date! |
Monday 14th February 2005 06:18 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks, rutzy! I had a lot of fun writing it! |
Majick Sunday 13th February 2005 10:41 | February Fifteenth |
Congratulations on a throughly well deserved victory in the competition. This really is an excellent story
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Sunday 13th February 2005 11:57 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks! I had no idea until your review came through! I really enjoyed your story as well - I love well-written Ron/Harry moments. |
Aibhinn Saturday 12th February 2005 22:24 | February Fifteenth |
This was delightful! Being a junior-high teacher, believe me, I know
all about the 'prat brigade'--I've got a few of them amongst my
students. I'm still giggling over this story. Well done!
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Sunday 13th February 2005 12:09 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Since I was a high school teacher for ten years, I had lots of interaction with teenagers! Plus I remember those delightful days of my own life all too well! Thanks for your review. |
HisGirl Saturday 12th February 2005 10:27 | February Fifteenth |
Super cute! You really knew how to get into both Harry and Ginny's head. |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:31 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Since I've written from both Harry's and Ginny's point of view - that part wasn't hard. It was alot of fun to have both of their thoughts on the same situation. Thanks for your review! |
arios Friday 11th February 2005 23:27 | February Fifteenth |
Cute, really cute! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:30 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks for your review. It's always good to hear from you. I wonder if you knew it was me? |
itsme07863 Thursday 10th February 2005 13:27 | February Fifteenth |
haha! that was really good. i liked it!!
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Sunday 13th February 2005 12:29 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for your review! |
lovesprungfromhate Monday 7th February 2005 07:47 | February Fifteenth |
This was great.
Everyone's already commented on all of the parts I liked, so take it as a given that I feel the same way.
So fab. I'm going to go read it again. |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:29 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it. I really enjoyed writing it and giving H/G a fun few days to think about nothing but their love lives. |
lissabee Tuesday 1st February 2005 22:25 | February Fifteenth |
The change of POV back and forth was excellent, it added a bit of surprise to the mix. Quite funny and creative! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:28 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad the POV wasn't a problem. Many people don't like first person POV. Thanks for your review. |
Jner Monday 31st January 2005 23:22 | February Fifteenth |
Yay! So cute. Well done.
J |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:26 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I"m glad you liked it. Thanks for your review. |
Pugpal Sunday 30th January 2005 14:14 | February Fifteenth |
*giggles* cute! Good job! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:26 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it. Did you know it was me? |
Anne Sunday 30th January 2005 07:03 | February Fifteenth |
definatly getting my vote...
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Sunday 13th February 2005 12:25 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! |
wokka42 Sunday 30th January 2005 00:49 | February Fifteenth |
Charming! I like your witty - and biting - sense of humor, it sets a nicely whimsical tone for the fic. Bouncing between Harry and Ginny's points of view was a clever touch. Well done! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:21 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it. And I'm glad that I finally have a chance to respond to all the reviews. Secrecy doesn't work well for me! |
Delani Saturday 29th January 2005 23:05 | February Fifteenth |
Ahh, how I love a Post-Hogwarts tale. I liked the style you had going with repeating the same line into each transitioning POV. And the use of luscious, (...her toes, lol) A few moments seemed a bit awkward in the dialogue, but I really was pleased with the overall story! The surprise ending definetely added to the intrigue.
Delani |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:20 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it. I think I tried to stuff a few of the challenges lines into character's mouths, which may have seemed awkward. I appreciate your review - I wonder if you knew it was me! |
mary-v Saturday 29th January 2005 21:28 | February Fifteenth |
I absolutely loved this! you did an excellent job with this! I loved every single part, and the idea of them being married and writing a letter to their daughter was an amazing idea! Other than a few minor typos, you did a brilliant job!
~Maria~ |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:19 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'll have to fix the typos, now that I can. Thanks for your review. I wonder if you knew it was me! |
freshwater Saturday 29th January 2005 17:00 | February Fifteenth |
My favorite of the competition so far....love your humor and your wordplay! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:18 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks for your kind words. It was a fun challenge to begin with. Nothing like Valentine's Day to inspire! |
PurpleHeather Saturday 29th January 2005 09:09 | February Fifteenth |
Very Very nice
I really enjoyed every part of the story. The one-liners and especially the third-year-girl persona bits.
Bravo! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:17 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it. It was fun to write and came quickly once I figured out how I wanted their day to go wrong. Thanks for your review. |
XiaoXiao Saturday 29th January 2005 02:29 | February Fifteenth |
Oh, bravo! This is probably my favourite to win so far. It's very funny, very fluffy, and has just the right sprinkling of angst. Great job! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:16 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked the story and I wondered if you knew it was me! Thanks for your review - it's always good to hear from you. |
clareindil Friday 28th January 2005 18:10 | February Fifteenth |
Totally excellent!
The story already had enough clever twists and turns and then you zap us with the end. Great fun and very nicely handled internal dialogue. Loved Ginny going to Hogsmead with Jeanne, Neville and Jeanne's chest.
clare |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:15 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it. I really had a fun time writing it. It was great to give H/G a break from the worry of Voldemort, etc. . . |
wvchemteach Friday 28th January 2005 16:21 | February Fifteenth |
This story is brilliant. The one-liners are funny. The confusion of both Harry and Ginny humorous. But as it should be they get it right in the end.
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Sunday 13th February 2005 12:13 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it and I wondered if you knew it was me! I really wanted to respond to everyone's reviews earlier, but I couldn't. Secrets just kill me. |
Majick Friday 28th January 2005 15:47 | February Fifteenth |
Just marvellous. I really think you've done a great job in capturing the moods of teenage boys - and, in Jeanne, the insecurity of the maturing teenage girl - in this piece. Dean's complete ignorance of Ginny, Neville and Jeanne is typical of the males of this age, and it's a nice change for someone other than Harry to be that clueless.
For his part, Harry is great in this story. He gets up the courage to ask Ginny out, and has the sense to go to Hogsmeade even though she has to turn him down. A (re)union in the forest between the two makes a nice change form the fireplace or the Quidditch changing rooms.
I also love the way you've worked your chosen phrases into the story as well. They don't seem forced and in at least two of the three cases I'd read past them before clocking them, whereas in many such challenges the story builds up to the phrases before ebbing away again. It was nice to see Seamus and Dean get some significant screen time as a result of their lines, too...
Between Harry's protectiveness and Ginny's honesty I love it when she says 'I only fit the last part, I'm afraid' - you've given your characters some real depth in the short time available. All in all, an excellent piece. |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:11 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Thanks again for alerting me to my win and for leaving me this lovely long review. I really appreciate your specific comments. |
tcny97 Friday 28th January 2005 13:31 | February Fifteenth |
this was......one of the ...... most hilarious stories i've ever read. |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:10 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you laughed. I had fun writing it. Thanks for your review. |
Jedione Friday 28th January 2005 13:14 | February Fifteenth |
Wonderful! That was sinply excellent. Both points of view and a peak into the future.
Great Job! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:05 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
I'm glad you liked it. It was a lot of fun to write. Thanks for your review. |
amulder Friday 28th January 2005 12:55 | February Fifteenth |
I very much liked this piece. The change in P.O.V. was deftly
handled throughout. I really liked how each section started the
same way the previous ended. Very original, and it caught me by
surprise the first time. After that it was a nice way to tie
everything together.
Also very astue of Harry to recognize his roommates as Prats. But
then, they are 16 year old boys. It's pretty genetic, and almost
unavoidable. (I say that as a man who is happy to NOT have to go
through that again! )
I also quite liked how it so gently sequed into the reminiscences of a comfortably married and loving couple.
Thanks for sharing.
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Sunday 13th February 2005 12:04 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Harry is so clear about this since he is looking from a considerable distance of time. That seemed to be the only way to write something like this and have the teen protagonists as aware of their feelings and motivations as they were in this story. It was fun to write. Thanks for your review! |
Felicia8 Friday 28th January 2005 12:43 | February Fifteenth |
That was really cute! Though I liked their new explanation, their original story is the best! |
Sunday 13th February 2005 12:00 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Oh yes - but often children don't really want to know all the detail about Mum and Dad. Really, did they have a life before they were born? How dare they! Thanks for your review. |
Kelleypen Friday 28th January 2005 12:16 | February Fifteenth |
This was a nice feel good bit of fluff for an achy day. You do internal dialogue well. Bravo, or brava? since I don't know who I'm reviewing. |
Sunday 13th February 2005 11:58 | February Fifteenth (Author Response) |
Oh, I so wanted to say - it's me! I'm not very good with secrets, I'm afraid. Thanks for your review. |