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Reviews For Defining Moments by TheGov

majolie
Sunday 4th January 2009 20:17
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Loved this chapter. Really great. I welled up.
siriusnu24948
Thursday 26th July 2007 14:30
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I guess I'm way behind with this story. I wish I had found it pre-HBP, but all the same it was simply, BRILLIANT! I absolutley loved how you described the formation and development of Ron and Hermione's relationship while also throwing in a few details about the rest of their lives that would have shaped the events.

A few things really jumped out at me with your story that just made realize how right I was to pick this story to read the other day at my mum's office. McGonagall was a great addition, I loved seeing a softer and more emotional side of her. That was great. The characterization was just awesome. It reminded me a lot of the fanfic that also happened to be my first read, "After the End". I loved "After the End" and I love your story. Perhaps the coolest thing about your story was the use of "Permissum nos comedo imbibo et exsisto hilaris pro cras nos intereo" was so cool because the translation reminded me of something and then I realized it is used in the Dave Matthews Band song "Tripping Billies". "Eat, drink, and be merry for tomorrow we'll die." That was so cool.

No complaints. You wrote a fantastic story that has brightened the dark and somewhat dismal stretch my girlfriend has been away this summer.

Thanks-

Derrick
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Sunday 15th July 2007 15:31
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What you did with Mrs. Black's portrait: Batten down the old bat...brilliant!
The conversation with Hermione's grandmother was a perfect lead-in to Hermione taking the reins and relieving Ron of his cold showers.
I love the idea of Harry's dual role at rhe wedding...PERFECT!
Thank you again for this wonderful story...I'm no longer pacing the floor, waiting for this week to mercifully end!
rupertgrintsgirl
Monday 8th January 2007 21:20
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IT'S PERFECT!!! GO RON! GO HERMIONE!
daniel_r_crazy22
Monday 13th November 2006 17:48
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What a beautiful ending. And I feel a little sorry for Harry. At lease he is taking it all well. Very good chapter.
GryffindorDragon
Thursday 21st September 2006 08:51
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Very nice. I like your Ron -- he's not such an idiot. But you've made Harry a bit thick; are you telling me he's blind to what he has in Ginny ?
sonicdale
Sunday 15th May 2005 23:07
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Touching. The "Silent Night" scene, the toasts, the first time with R/H, the implied H/G pairing, the double 'giving away the bride' and best man for Harry.
All touching. Good work.
NOW...

Since I see this is a WIP, finish it before I read the rest of the chapters you've already posted. Consider this a virtual owl delivering you a box of Honeydukes chocolates as a bribe. :)
SillyGillie
Thursday 3rd February 2005 19:36
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Brilliant!
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Tuesday 1st February 2005 03:10
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This is a wonderful chapter.  I especially like the very authentic thoughts and emotions shown by Ron and Hermione.  Harry's reaction to finding the two in the dorm was very sensitive and mature.  I have to wonder whether we'll see such a scene in canon, when JKR gets around to Book Seven.  I'd like to think that by then Harry will have found a girlfriend of his own.

Your ending scene, with the four teens after midnight on Christmas Eve, was very tender and quite effective.  Well done!  Thanks for sharing this with us.

Arnel
Monday 31st January 2005 10:12
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I keep wondering what sort of special moments will appear in Book 7 thinking that many authors may very well write scenes similar to what will appear in canon.  This chapter seems to be one of those moments.  I can very well see Harry still (without a steady girlfriend) surrounded by Ron and Hermione (who have finally admitted their feelings for each other) and Ginny (who may or may not have a steady boyfriend), all staying safely at Hogwarts for Christmas and experiencing a moment very much like the end of this chapter.  I truly enjoyed reading through to the end.  I felt rather sorry for Ron when he realized that his network of older brothers was no longer readily available to him for a heart-to-heart full of brotherly advice and empathized with Hermione when she wished her mother was still around for that all-important mother/daughter talk.  Such things are so important to making life-changing decisions or when one is facing the unknown, uncertain future.  I'm really glad that Harry knows that he is not alone in his fight against Voldemort. 

Your story just keeps getting better and better each time I log in to it.  I look forward to your next chapter.  Please post again soon.

Monday 31st January 2005 18:21Defining Moments (Author Response)
Thank you! I appreciate your kind words! I think we all wish that something, some small element of our fanfiction might be proved right by cannon eventually, thought we all know it won't happen.
Robert Owen
Sunday 30th January 2005 19:01
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Bravo!  You caught so much of the emotions and the feelings here.  And Harry's reaction was perfect!

Now, about Ch 5.  If schoolworks the problem, I'm sure several of us could spring a few bucks and take out an ad in the Ring Tum Phi asking the profs to give you less homework so you can finish the really important stuff, like this story.

BTW, interesting letter to the ed in the Trident about SPE.  Makes me wonder if your might right than I thought about the admin.

Sunday 30th January 2005 19:24Defining Moments (Author Response)
Nice offer, but I'm student teaching this term, and I'm actually bogged down in my grading. Not much that can be done about that, I'm afraid. Thanks for the review!
BeckiSoup
Sunday 30th January 2005 18:13
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It's the part about Hermione's grandmother being a "consort battleship"!

You owe me cookies! (and milk)

Hahahahahahahahahah

BeckiSoup
Sunday 30th January 2005 18:10
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Hi Ugly Brother!

Is the reference to "My Fair Lady" the line "We hated eachother right up until we fell in love"?

Love Sistwerp

BeckiSoup
Sunday 30th January 2005 18:09
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Do I still get cookies and milk for getting the musical right?

BeckiSoup
Sunday 30th January 2005 16:51
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Hi Ugly Brother!

I liked this! Good stuff!

Did the reference to the Rex Harrison musical have to do with "My Fair Lady" and the way Hermione's grandmother described her grandfather? Was she describing Henry Higgans?

If I'm right, I expect real cookies and milk when I see you at Easter!

Another fabulous chapter!

Love Sistwerp

Sunday 30th January 2005 17:01Defining Moments (Author Response)

You're close, sistwerp. You've got the musical, but not quite with the referance. It's in the flashback section though. :)

Lakshmi Potter
Sunday 30th January 2005 15:52
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 Oh the happy fluffy goodness. *Sniff*

(And mind you, I rarely tear up over fanfics, so that's saying something!)

~Lakshmi 

Sunday 30th January 2005 21:00Defining Moments (Author Response)
I'm honored, thank you!
Pugpal
Sunday 30th January 2005 15:08
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*smile* I love this story! Great job!
Sunday 30th January 2005 21:01Defining Moments (Author Response)
Thank you! I'm enjoying writing it, and I'm pleased so many are enjoying reading it.
freshwater
Sunday 30th January 2005 13:05
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Wow, I love your whole series, but this one is the best.  All the reflections and misgivings about the future were beautifully handled.  Well done!
Sunday 30th January 2005 21:02Defining Moments (Author Response)
Thank you! This chapter took the longest to write, and I guess the extra work paid off then. Thanks for taking the time to review!