GinevraMollyWeasley
Wednesday 4th February 2009 18:03 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| ok, i forgot to say this in a review of the last chapter, but you wrote " As he rose, Draco seemed to give a last, sudden look in Harry's direction, but it was hard to tell because it was only a ripple in the strange lump of invisibility between Tonks and Mundungus." didn't Dung die in the last story? by drinking a slow - acting poison? |
GryffindorDragon
Friday 20th October 2006 10:45 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
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daniel_r_crazy22
Friday 23rd June 2006 22:27 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Well, it wasn't the best way to start the school year, but it was a start. |
Muggle Witch
Monday 2nd May 2005 08:56 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Another great chapter. |
Melindaleo
Friday 11th February 2005 12:58 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
Harry forced himself to stop. His gaze traveled the familiar dips and arches of the enormous building in front of him. So familiar, and yet somehow the building had lost a glow. Without Sirius . . . some of the magic had gone. Or maybe some of the hope Harry had been burying underneath his day-to-day actions, some of the possibilities. It was all gone. Sirius had been . . . what had he been? Harry sighed, unable to find the words. He no longer felt borderline suicidal, as he had during the summer, but his future was more bleak than it had been in years.
Sigh. I really liked that glimpse into Harry's thoughts. The part about some of the magic being gone...really great imagery there. Your action remains intense, and I loved Malfoy's terror of the Manticore. So very Malfoy, the little ferrit. You rock, my friend.
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| Tuesday 22nd February 2005 10:02 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One (Author Response) |
Sigh. I really liked that glimpse into Harry's thoughts. The part about some of the magic being gone...really great imagery there. Your action remains intense, and I loved Malfoy's terror of the Manticore. So very Malfoy, the little ferrit. You rock, my friend.
The ferret!! Yes, the ferret! He is a little wimp, isn't he? Will be interesting to see if Harry can rub off on him a bit, won't it? Well, okay, maybe not for you. For me.
But no, YOU ROCK!!
love,
Ash
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Kelleypen
Friday 11th February 2005 12:16 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
You know, I think JKR may be saving a manticore for us in either book 6 or 7 too. . .
Nice job. |
DADAGinny
Friday 11th February 2005 07:48 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
That was great -- showed what a wimp Malfoy really is. I love the story, but I wish your chapters were longer!
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| Tuesday 22nd February 2005 10:05 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One (Author Response) |
Sorry about how short the chapters are, DADA Ginny! I'll work on that! And yes, Malfoy is a wimp. I'm hoping maybe we can work on that a bit, but I'm not sure that the raw material is there. He'll never be Harry, that's for sure!
Thanks for the review!
Ash |
juliet
Friday 11th February 2005 00:02 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| this continues to be a great story to read. Look forward to more updates. |
| Tuesday 22nd February 2005 10:03 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One (Author Response) |
Thanks, Juliet!!!
I hope you like the next chapters!
Ash |
SillyGillie
Thursday 10th February 2005 20:13 | Harry Potter and the Year of the One |
| Brilliant chapter! I loved it! Wow that manticore was crazy! LoL Malfoy the babbling idiot! Too funny! Awesome job! I can't wait until the next chapter!!!!!! |
