That was so touching.  I lost for words.

For almost every story I tell the writer to write more because I think it would benfit them.  I think you've really put the whole story there.  don't get me wrong I still think you should write a sequel or more ch. but if you don't people won't be grieving for more.

that was awsome

Truely Touched, levotatingT

p.s I don't think anyone has ever made me think so emotionaly deep.

It's rare to see a combination of a well written story and one that truly touches your feelings as well. Please keep writing.

I couldn't review when I first read because I was a bawling mess and would have been incoherent. I loved so many things about this story, mostly that it wrenched so many emotions out of me. I'm in awe of your style of writing, you make the reader feel like they're watching the scene from a distance, and yet the emotions put us right in the middle of the story -- very clever of you! I loved this:

Ginny remembered Bill telling her how happy they would be, once it was over. After the end.

She remembered Bill.

Since reading Cera's Prince William, I have a strong affection for the unseen relationship between Ginny and Bill. Also, the "she remembered Bill" made "Remember Cedric Diggory" echo through my head... it was quite unnerving actually.

Anyway, I can't wait until you post some more! Reading this was both the highlight (because it's brilliant) and the lowlight (because it's sad) of my week,  Fandom wise.

Katie.

Lovely. Just lovely. Even more than that- beautiful. Even though I don't truly agree with the Harry/Ginny stuff for some reason, I just LOVED this to bits. The feelings of grief through Ginny and emotions and your way of describing it all- All of it, just wonderful. I can't wait to read any more of your stuff, if there's any (and if this was your first, than WELL DONE! 'mazing!).

Gorgeous. :) ;) :D

Oh!  *sniff*  Beautiful.  Just beautiful! 

 Thank you.

This is beautiful, so sad, but beautiful.  The images your writing conjure leave my head spinning along with a huge lump in my throat.  At first, by the way Ginny was acting, I thought that Harry would be at the end of the list of those Ginny was trying not to mourn.  I'm glad he survived his encounter with Voldemort.  I can picture Neville's role in this story quite easily: he's that sort of character, so quietly strong, and you write him beautifully.

Thanks for posting this story.  It went straight to my heart.

Just outstanding.  I'm still shivering -- the emotions are so vivd and strong.  You gave us a triple hit with Molly, Fred and Bill, and the combination of their loss was palpable.  

This is one of the best fics I've read in ages, WM.  Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

Ok. While I'm aware of how embarrassing this is (believe me!), I had such a fangirl reaction when I realised that you'd read it. The quality of writing in 'The New Professor' still impresses me, and I was amazed by how creative your plot was when I read it.

My moment of gushing is over. I promise.  Thank you for reviewing, and for the kind comments!

I hope she doesn't die too. If you were in that kind of situation, there's few people you'd need more than your mum! (or semi-adoptive mum).

I've written a completely different fic for the Challenge at SIYE, but the HP fandom is still totally new territory. I'm addicted to reading fanfics here, but I might try writing more. Maybe. Just need the courage to post them!

Oh, so brilliant. Love this line: "She remembered him as a boy, awkward and unsure...and so beautiful inside, it had always amazed her so few people saw it." I love Neville, and this wonderfully-crafted sentence fit him perfectly. Great job; brilliant, really.  

This was filled with so may heart-wrenching, good lines that made my eyes mist over with tears. "The world was different now. It wasn't what she remembered, and it wasn't what she wanted. She wanted her mum." Oh, so sad.

I can't really say enough about it...I think I'll go read it again.

J

I love how many people love Neville. He's one of the most overlooked characters in the series, I think.

Thank you for reading; you gave me one of the most encouraging reviews, and I was nail-bitingly nervous about posting here, so I'm really grateful!

Wow - such powerful language. This was painful to read, just because you have made us identify with Ginny so deeply. I sincerely hope the series doesn't go in this direction, since I would be sobbing my eyes out as I read. Thanks, and I look forward to reading your stuff in the future!

I hadn't really thought about continuing on from there, but maybe. I'm still not completely confident about writing HP fanfiction (I was never, ever going to do it - figured I'd leave it to other people - but for some reason I wanted to try writing this). But I love the H/G ship so much, and HP is the most fun fandom to try writing in, it turns out!

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

That was... I don't think beautiful is quite the right word for it, because it wasn't. It was so much more. Wonderful and terrible at the same time. Raw emotion.

I loved Neville's part in this. It did so much for me. I've always seen him as the cast asid one, the one who has potential but will never truly matter, however much I want him to. Your story granted him a part so special that it was this that made the tears fall.

Well done. Keep writing.

That's exactly how I see Neville too. I'm an unashamed Neville-fangirl, lol. That's one of the reasons why I tried writing this fic. I just don't like the way he's portrayed in some stories, and I don't like the way a lot of people react to him in canon. I truly hope JKR does something great with his character in the books.

Thank you for reviewing; I really appreciate it.

  Where's my box of tissue.  I had a wretched time reading toward the end there.  Reading glasses are a new thing for me and I've not quiet gotten the hang of wiping tears away without smudging them or reading through tears and the lenses.  Heart felt - very emotional - very sad.  Loved it.  Thanks for the good cry. 

Your description of Ginny's pain at the beginning was horribly accurate.  Well done!

Thank you for reviewing! And reading. I hope it wasn't too depressing; I usually live for fluff stories, so I don't really know what came over me!

Oh, getting used to glasses - I remember that. Add in watering eyes and non-waterproof mascara and it wasn't pretty!