sonicdale
Monday 18th April 2005 10:50 | To the Gates of Hell |
Nice.
Love the breakdown of the Black estate. Hope that comes up again.
This has the makings of a great fic. Hope you get it finished before HBP. |
Muggle Witch
Sunday 17th April 2005 19:44 | To the Gates of Hell |
| To Padfoot. So good. Well done!!
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Spark Soliton
Sunday 17th April 2005 18:48 | To the Gates of Hell |
You're definetly on to something here, each chapter grows in confidence and the dialogue gets better. I like the inner monologues of Harry and there is a nice, natural flow to the budding relationship to Ginny. Nice 'last letter' from Sirius and in general the story comes together better is this chapter. |
Lulabelle
Friday 25th March 2005 19:46 | To the Gates of Hell |
| Okay. I'm officially hooked on this fic. I really like the fact that they all are getting to stay together w/Tonks & Lupin as their minders for the summer. Maybe they'll all get some feelings out in the open. Maybe. And I liked it when you made Ginny get all hacked off at Harry for the way that he acted. Sirius' will was pretty enlightening also. Update soon please! |
Reenie
Friday 25th March 2005 10:50 | To the Gates of Hell |
PLEASE put a hankie warning on this story i had a wonderful cry while reading it (frightened my sweetie too) and i amost shorted out the mouse *grin* needless to say i love this story please keep writing.... more soon if possible
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Shadow Hider
Friday 25th March 2005 09:43 | To the Gates of Hell |
| great chapter! |
x_Rose_x
Friday 25th March 2005 07:44 | To the Gates of Hell |
| I just wanted to say, I really love this story, the letter and will,
made me cry! it;s sooo sad! poor harry! anyway I really love this story
update soon, and keep up the brilliant writting!
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BloodlessAce
Friday 25th March 2005 07:25 | To the Gates of Hell |
| Great story.
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dophingirl79
Friday 25th March 2005 07:16 | To the Gates of Hell |
| very good, I can't wait for more . keep up the great work. |
Melindaleo
Friday 25th March 2005 07:05 | To the Gates of Hell |
I like the bonding with Remus, but I would have liked to see Harry really get drunk. I was having great visions of his friend's expressions when a pissed Harry stumbled in the room with them. Sigh. Maybe another time.
I'm concerned that Madam Pomphrey didn't have a private word with Harry over what had happened, or any kind of counseling if they did supect suicide. I'm hoping Remus has been told to at least bring it up. |
p0tterfan
Friday 25th March 2005 00:55 | To the Gates of Hell |
Harry showing some very good dueling skills to take out an auror and a
former defence against the dark arts teacher at the same time!
He's improving a lot, also considering the fact that he just recovered
from an injury too?
Good chapter though, looking forward to the next!
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