pyromain
Sunday 9th September 2007 06:54 | A Start |
| coming clean can have a positive effect. |
Delfino
Tuesday 31st May 2005 18:10 | A Start |
| Great story! It was almost exactly how I pictured it! You captured the characters perfectly! |
| Saturday 11th June 2005 13:51 | A Start (Author Response) |
| Cheers mate. I'm glad you like it! |
levotatingT
Tuesday 31st May 2005 13:08 | A Start |
It was so touching. I love how Harry opened up to Harry by the lake
Great job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
| Saturday 11th June 2005 13:51 | A Start (Author Response) |
Hey. Thanks for that, and sorry for the slow response. I didn't think I'd get any more reviews for this but I was very excited to see two more.
Much appreciated! |
Musings
Wednesday 11th May 2005 00:54 | A Start |
This story has so many truly wonderful moments it's hard for me to give each of them their props! I think my favorite was this:
Ginny Weasley had always prided herself on her adaptability. Right now her entire world had been wrenched from its roots and then placed back down quite methodically on its head and yet she knew exactly what to say and do.
“Harry, you are such a prat,” she said and then kissed him.
Just delightful! Thank you for sharing it with us and I look forward to reading more of your work!
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Delani
Tuesday 10th May 2005 20:58 | A Start |
"How can we justify what’s important to us when so many bigger things are happening?”
I ask myself this question all the time, and it feels so good to hear someone else as confused. This whole piece felt very natural. Well done.
Del |
SillyGillie
Tuesday 10th May 2005 06:00 | A Start |
| Awesome story! |
critmo
Tuesday 10th May 2005 03:19 | A Start |
| And a good start, too. |
Rosebeth
Monday 9th May 2005 22:46 | A Start |
| That was awesome. I cried with Harry out by the lake. I cheered Ron when he gave Harry a shove. Excellent job. |
Arnel
Monday 9th May 2005 22:13 | A Start |
| What a great story! I like the fact that Harry is admitting that he feels better for talking about what's going on inside his head and that he sees Ginny as the one to put him back together. That's quite the compliment in itself. You've done a supurb job of keeping Harry and his friends in character in a story that moves along at a nice, steady pace. Bravo to you! |
p0tterfan
Monday 9th May 2005 22:07 | A Start |
| A good start indeed ! :) Keep up the good work.
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EtreEstRever
Monday 9th May 2005 21:42 | A Start |
| That was cute. A little sad at parts, but very, very cute. Good job on that! |
belladonna803
Monday 9th May 2005 21:29 | A Start |
| That was absolutely fantastic! I have read thousands of stories, and I have to say that this was one of the closest to feeling like canon that I have ever come across. Thank you for writing it; I adore H/G, and have tried several times to write a story that will do their possible relationship justice, but so far I've fallen terribly short of the mark. You're a gifted storyteller...way to go! |
| Tuesday 10th May 2005 06:23 | A Start (Author Response) |
| Wow. I don't know what to say to a compliment like that. Thank you! |
Melindaleo
Monday 9th May 2005 19:23 | A Start |
Wow, this was fabulous. I love protective Ginny, and you've done her so well here. I liked the image of her holding Harry and glaring out across the lake. Nicely done.
I also enjoyed her referring to herself as a skinny runt with messy hair. Seems to me, that could describe Harry, as well. |
| Tuesday 10th May 2005 06:24 | A Start (Author Response) |
| Lol. Good point! I like that... err... I mean... *cough* yes, that's exactly what I was going for! Well spotted! |
EvieMarie
Monday 9th May 2005 16:26 | A Start |
| Oh, I loved it! Wonderful job. Very very very well done. It seemed so natural and just... *good*. And I can so imagine Ron and Hermione cornering Harry! Oh, well done! Please write more h/g - it's brilliant! |
Gridley
Monday 9th May 2005 16:06 | A Start |
| I like it. |
hfleming8
Monday 9th May 2005 15:05 | A Start |
“Who put me back together again.”
Jay - I will always think that it was THE best lines I've ever read in fanfiction and so appropriate for these two!
Well done and great job on getting onto PhoenixSong!
So proud of you ickle one!
~Hez |
| Monday 9th May 2005 16:12 | A Start (Author Response) |
| It's embarrassing when you get reviews from your mum. |
Ima Quidditch Fan
Monday 9th May 2005 13:13 | A Start |
| This is brilliant! I could see this scenerio taking place in canon. Very well done... will you be adding more to it? I hope so. |
| Monday 9th May 2005 16:09 | A Start (Author Response) |
| Lol, just figured out this reply function. Thanks for your comments! Very much appreciated. I was trying to make it as canonically possible as I could. :) I have a few chapters of 6th year fic on similar plotlines done but with HBP coming so soon it may end up morphing into something else! |
Spark Soliton
Monday 9th May 2005 11:12 | A Start |
| Wow, wonderful story - excellent plot bunny! All dross removed and a nice, tight and cohesive story that still felt fully fleshed out! Loved the way you portrayed the characters, especially Ginny and Ron stood out - excellent story-telling! |
| Monday 9th May 2005 16:15 | A Start (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the great comments. I sent you a 'thanks' email before I figured out the 'author reply' option as the appropriate response. |
St Margarets
Monday 9th May 2005 08:03 | A Start |
Well, look who is here! Good going, Gryffindor! It's always nerve-racking to post your first story. I know you expect me to comment on the fluffy kiss - which was very sweet and not overdone - but I really must commend you for capturing Snape so well. He's such a complete Snape (for lack of a better word) in his full-sentence snarkiness! Well done.
Hope to see more from you! |
h2o
Monday 9th May 2005 08:01 | A Start |
Yay J Forias! Really sweet story and very good writing :) Just a tad to short, I want more :D
//Kev |
