MorgainneMoriancumer
Monday 20th November 2006 13:19 | A Different Boy Who Lived |
| Poor Neville, imagine, being invisible to almost everyone |
| Monday 20th November 2006 16:43 | A Different Boy Who Lived (Author Response) |
| Thankfully, the most frequent visitors are all in on the secret. |
GryffindorDragon
Tuesday 25th July 2006 11:00 | A Different Boy Who Lived |
Isn't it bit much that Colin Creevy just happens to move in next door? And where is Dennis? Aren't you making Augusta a bit paranoid? 4 years later and still the Fidelius Charm. I bet Dennis' mom just about had a fit when he up and disappeared
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| Wednesday 26th July 2006 04:30 | A Different Boy Who Lived (Author Response) |
If you think Colin is a bit much, you shall absolutely hate me for the events of chapter 4... I admit it's quite a stretch, but not outside the realms of possibility. Dennis will make an appearance, Augusta is paranoid. The Fidelius will be along for quite a while longer. And Mrs. Creevey did have quite the fit...
Thank you for your review,
Angelmorph |
daniel_r_crazy22
Thursday 29th June 2006 13:01 | A Different Boy Who Lived |
| That was good. And poor Neville. And woah, Colin. |
| Thursday 29th June 2006 13:03 | A Different Boy Who Lived (Author Response) |
| Thanks for the review. |
dophingirl79
Tuesday 17th May 2005 16:10 | A Different Boy Who Lived |
| Harry bcomming friends with Colin, well at least at this age, he doesn't have any of the hero worship, I wonder if he will develop it with Neville? keep up the good work. |
| Tuesday 17th May 2005 20:00 | A Different Boy Who Lived (Author Response) |
I kinda like the lack of hero worship and I doubt any will be appearing in this story (at least from Colin). Look up to him certainly, but to worship someone he's grown up knowing... well you'll just have to see...
Thanks for the review,
Angelmorph |
Arnel
Monday 16th May 2005 23:29 | A Different Boy Who Lived |
Another engaging and interesting chapter which has me quite intrigued at how everything is going to come together. You've done a really good job in showing the four-year-old mentality; your Harry and Neville are quite believeable and I love how receptive Harry is to the fact that Neville just might need Lily more that usual after their first encounter with Colin. Speaking of Colin, I like this twist to the "annoying little first year" portrayal of him in canon and I'm glad that Mrs. Longbottom has begrudgingly assented to speaking with Colin and his parents about Neville.
I'm looking forward to chapter five... |
| Tuesday 17th May 2005 11:27 | A Different Boy Who Lived (Author Response) |
Thank you. Come together... hmm.... I'm working on it... Thank you, I quite worried about getting the mentality right... My beta certainly helped with that. I'm glad you approve about Colin. He won't be going away for quite a while and he's become pretty central to certain aspects of the plot. (or at least I think so...)
I'm working on it...
Thanks again for reading,
Angelmorph |
