lionessofvaliance
Wednesday 26th January 2011 07:00 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Aw so cute, love it! |
majolie
Saturday 3rd January 2009 21:09 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Such a sweet and funny story. Really cute. You do a good job with the characterizations and making the characters behave in a way that seems normal for them ... I loved how hesitant Harry was about announcing his plans for the day. |
gymnastgal19
Sunday 20th January 2008 09:02 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
hehe nice picnic. I loved rons speech and how he didnt notice that he wassaying stuff really loud :p
cute ending
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daniel_r_crazy22
Tuesday 27th June 2006 17:08 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| What a way to bring everyone together, just make PB&J. Very good, and a wonderful ending. |
XXXmister-E werepony unit
Tuesday 21st February 2006 13:59 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
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levotatingT
Friday 1st July 2005 20:46 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
AWWW that was cute, but I could guess what was going to happen. I like the fact that I could guess though. I especially liked when Ron made his speech
grreat job, keep writing, and Plez write back
levotatingT |
Astrid
Friday 24th June 2005 18:48 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| This is my second reading, and I love it as much as the first! Good work. (I'm assuming I read this at SIYE for the picnic contest). |
Lulabelle
Sunday 22nd May 2005 11:56 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Very cute! I liked it a lot. Good job! |
rand_wot
Thursday 19th May 2005 09:52 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
That's all that needs to be said. |
Reenie
Thursday 19th May 2005 06:50 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Awwww what a sweet bit of fluff... and was that a Marry Poppins reffrence to "Bert" the jack of all trades with the sidewalk artist? thanks for the grin at 6am |
XiaoXiao
Wednesday 18th May 2005 22:25 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Tee hee. That was really adorable. Loved the speech by Ron, and the ending was very sigh-worthy.
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Fuzzy
Wednesday 18th May 2005 19:35 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
Very cute. Isn't peanut butter and jelly sandwich? I sincerly hope that you have more fantastic works for me to read. |
DADAGinny
Wednesday 18th May 2005 13:43 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
How sweet! Loved the part where you put Bert in the story. Is it true they don't have PB&Js in the UK?
Definately loved the cleaning up part!
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tante
Tuesday 17th May 2005 21:16 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| That is, of course, the BEST way to get rid of unsightly jam streaks on the object of one's affections. Adorable. Refreshing. And would you please share with me the charm for the jam jars? Molly would like to know! |
p0tterfan
Tuesday 17th May 2005 21:12 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
Is this a late entry to the Siye picnic contest? :)
Good job on it!
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tanaxanth
Tuesday 17th May 2005 20:58 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
awwwww
personally I liked Ron's speech before he niced it up |
Astrid
Tuesday 17th May 2005 17:21 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Awww, cute and fluffy, just the way I like it! |
Delani
Tuesday 17th May 2005 17:19 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
Hah. I always knew Ginny was clever! *wink wink*
Delani |
Bart
Tuesday 17th May 2005 15:45 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
*sniggers*
Great story, a lot of fun to read. couldn't help but laugh as Ron
headed to his fate at speakers corner; good to see him take it
happily(ish) on the chin.
Then a literaly sweet fluffy ending!
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emmamoonpotter
Tuesday 17th May 2005 13:39 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| I love this! Fluffernutter goodness.
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h2o
Tuesday 17th May 2005 10:49 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Haha, ruddy brilliant! The ending was the best part Great read, keep up the good work! |
Kelleypen
Tuesday 17th May 2005 10:26 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Strawberry jam kisses. *grin* lovely stuff. Thank you for sharing this. |
critmo
Tuesday 17th May 2005 09:35 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| I hate the idea that H/G will need some more years to get together, however, I really like this story! |
dancinginmagic
Tuesday 17th May 2005 09:16 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
Loved it! Mmm, PBJs...
I liked the comment about the fact that they all thought the other two were working too hard, except I can't quite see Hermione as thinking that about Ron. Cute line, though.
I loved the sticky end. There's no better way for them to get together than over - or should I say, under - jam.
Jam jar prank was tres cool!
Sarah |
sonicdale
Tuesday 17th May 2005 08:39 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
PBJ.
Figures.
Love the bit about the chalk drawings.
Exploding jam jars? Sounds like a twins prank.
good work. |
GovCampbell
Tuesday 17th May 2005 06:46 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
Yah! I knew you could do it! Congradulations honey!
The story is great! I told you you have good ideas! |
Antonia East
Tuesday 17th May 2005 05:24 | Harry Potter and the PB & J Sandwich: How the Boy-Who-Lived Met A Sticky End |
| Aw! How sweet. What a lovely ending. I thought the
whole story was charming - funny and believable. Plus I love
peanut butter and jam together - so I can quite understand Ron and
Ginny's reaction!
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